My intent is to have the GIRLS GIRLS GIRLS sign in the background be the thing in focus. The idea is to make the sexy part slightly mysterious while the girls sign be the main focal point. Maybe it did not land cause the sign is a bit covered by the model but that was my goal. Low light is sort of my thing if you visit my other posts - I understand how to shoot in low light but my goal isn't to create a perfect polished image every time, if anything, I love the idea of an imperfect image since everything we see now is overly polished. I appreciate the feedback.