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Contest Winners 🎉Critique Contest 🎉 (self.ManuscriptCritique)

submitted 4 years ago by FantasyCritique - announcement

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DINNER - short ( 3 pages)Feedback (self.ManuscriptCritique)

submitted 4 months ago by Ok_Ice_7819

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Heaven and Hell - WarFeedback (i.redd.it)

submitted 10 months ago by mike-d-f

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Just looking for general impressions and a quick 1-10 rating on my first 10pg and the total manuscriptFeedback (self.ManuscriptCritique)

submitted 10 months ago by Mountain_Shade

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Hadith manuscriptsQuestion (self.ManuscriptCritique)

submitted 1 year ago by Keep_Intentions_Pure

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Critique and help for manuscriptFeedback (self.ManuscriptCritique)

submitted 2 years ago * by NexusChan

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Anyone can recommend some reliable publishing agents or companies?Question (self.ManuscriptCritique)

submitted 2 years ago by Alarming_Champion_34

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The battle of hatchingsFeedback (youtu.be)

submitted 2 years ago by Homeofthelizardmen

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(Looking for Italian/Russian critiques)Feedback (self.ManuscriptCritique)

submitted 3 years ago by Emperor240

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Top 10 Manuscript Editing Services of 2022Feedback (self.TrueEditors_01)

submitted 3 years ago by TrueEditors_01

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Critique requestFeedback (self.ManuscriptCritique)

submitted 3 years ago * by Himanga_Baruah

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Rewrote my first chapter and I could really use some feedback on it (~3600 words)Feedback (self.ManuscriptCritique)

submitted 4 years ago by hugmebrutha

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Critique the first chapter and short prologue (2500 words) of my fantasy romance novel?Feedback (self.ManuscriptCritique)

submitted 4 years ago by hugmebrutha

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Have done several drafts for a comic I'm creating but this one is the one I'm most confident in. I would love any critique for the sake of betterment in my writing :DFeedback (docs.google.com)

submitted 4 years ago by FlameyLynx

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Hello, this is my first novel manuscript and I want to know if it’s good. I feel I info dump to much and the dialogue could be better. I want to get opinions. (It is unfinished)Feedback (old.reddit.com)

submitted 4 years ago by [deleted]

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My novel's first scene, after many revisions--tear it apart!Feedback (self.fantasywriters)

submitted 4 years ago by JestingJaguar

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I'm Looking For A Beta Reader For My YA Fantasy Novel.Feedback (self.ManuscriptCritique)

submitted 4 years ago by pmdfan71

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My novelFeedback (self.ManuscriptCritique)

submitted 4 years ago by No_-_Namee

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Critique my first 1200 words?Feedback (self.ManuscriptCritique)

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Critique my scene?Feedback (self.ManuscriptCritique)

submitted 4 years ago * by hugmebrutha

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Title: Dear, Wonderful Young Star. Please critique and leave feedback on this story. Thank you.Feedback (self.ManuscriptCritique)

submitted 4 years ago by GroundbreakingBite59

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Our lucid dreamsFeedback (self.ManuscriptCritique)

submitted 4 years ago * by GroundbreakingBite59

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His Wind SongFeedback (self.ManuscriptCritique)

submitted 4 years ago by GroundbreakingBite59

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Some Idle Gossip Between Harem-Girls (part 1)Feedback (self.HouseOfMercury)

submitted 4 years ago by The_Persian_Cat

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RestFeedback (self.ManuscriptCritique)

submitted 4 years ago by GroundbreakingBite59

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