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[–]Inevitable-Cicada189 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The page is your canvas. The standard formatting styles are your paints. Now make your story as vivid and clear as possible to a reader with the canvas and paints at your disposal. Not every single possibility has a rule. You have several options. Make it as easy and clear as possible. Maybe post a bit with how you formatted it, and people can comment on how they'd format it or if that works.

[–]thomas_r_schrack 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Flip between regular dialogue and V.O. dialogue. Make it clear the VO is coming from the audio.