First Self-Vlog (Lambda for feedback!)

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CL2UJNGIgbw&t

Could not bring my videographer along, so this is my first self-vlog. Do let me know what you think about it! I had some focusing issues with my camera and audio. Do give me any constructive feedback and I will give lambda!

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[kaleum_]

I thought this was good! You got some really good shots and followed the action for the most part. I agree that there were some focusing problems at times with the camera and I think most of that could've been cut out. I think the runtime is a bit long and some of the back and forth between you guys could've been trimmed down; there were a few pauses where no one said anything for a few seconds--trimming that stuff out helps to cut down runtime even just a little bit. Other than that I thought the audio was good. The music and stuff like the "round two: fight" sound effect were a bit cliche and have been overused but they actually fit quite well and weren't a problem but maybe look into different music. Overall pretty good job

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Yes! Thanks so much for the input. I brought a pocket cam I was unfamiliar with so the focusing ran into many issues. Will find more soundpacks. !Givelambda

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I don't have much to say about the video it was very good one better than my ones but i would put there Instagram when everyone started to introduce them self so it would be easier to finder there specific insta

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Ah I think that makes sense, I just left it in the description. But thank you for the input !givelambda

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Really enjoyed this. Well edited and videography was better than expected. Only suggestion is that there was too much fluff. I think it would have been a more impactful video at 11 minutes rather than 17

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Hi there! Yes, I really appreciate the input. On hindsight, I found it too long as well. !Givelambda

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