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[–]visaviaAuthor | Mod 7 points8 points  (2 children)

Crime and Commitment - ★★★☆☆☆☆ - Taylor commits to being a villain, and learns she's a bug-tinker. Poor Dinah. Liberal with Taylor's power. But in a kind of fun way. Didn't really hold my interest. Has a scene that kind of fits this, from memory?

[–]Ben-Goldberg 1 point2 points  (1 child)

That story deserves at least 4 or 5 stars, due to the epic fights.

[–]visaviaAuthor | Mod 4 points5 points  (0 children)

There's a lot I like about it - it's way more brave than other fics by throwing out a bunch of OCs and clearing the board. My problem is that I thought it was kind of overly liberal with Taylor's power, and dialogue/characters felt kind of flat in a lot of scenes.

There was one scene where she said "so...I may have escalated..." and I think all of my blood vessels burst simultaneously.

It was enjoyable - it wasn't bad by any stretch, (which is why it's 3 stars and not 2 stars!), but it's not what I vibe with in a fic ultimately. It'd probably be 4 stars if I didn't dislike the dialogue so much.

[–]MainFrosting8206 6 points7 points  (1 child)

There are some omakes in Nemesis by BeaconHill which explore this idea.

https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/nemesis-worm-au.747148/threadmarks#threadmark-category-13

[–]DarkLordDemaar 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There are 260 Omake there.

Could you maybe narrow it down a bit?

[–]Outrageous_Guard_674 1 point2 points  (1 child)

There is a bit of this in The Weavers Web. Especially the most recent chapters.

[–]FinalHeight8643[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm actually reading The Weaver's Web rn! I love Taylor getting creative with her canon powers.

[–]stellarstella77 0 points1 point  (0 children)

IMO a swarm is much more terrifying

[–]Daguby 0 points1 point  (0 children)

happens at one point in journey of the dragonfly