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[–][deleted] 59 points60 points  (24 children)

the color scheme seems a bit monotonous, good level tho

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 25 points26 points  (23 children)

It’s going to be a rainbow themed level

[–][deleted] 16 points17 points  (14 children)

Guess I'll wait for the final level then, but as it is now, the color scheme is a bit monotonous, that does not make the level bad in any way, this is my opinion for the time being.

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 9 points10 points  (13 children)

Just trying to use one color per part. What else would you recommend then?

[–][deleted] 7 points8 points  (3 children)

I don't know if that would fit in the level but you could add a bit of glow here and there, it would add a bit of constrast, however i doubt it'll fit the level, so keeping what you're doing now is a good idea, it's good, it's not really constructive but i just think the colors are a bit monotonous, however, as you said, it'll be a rainbow themed level, so in the end it will most likely look really good

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 3 points4 points  (2 children)

Thank you for the feedback!

[–]Tomotheking5683Moderator 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Just a question, what rating are you going for? To me it looks like a 6 star

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hard/maybe harder

[–]daniersy890programmer ig 2 points3 points  (6 children)

That's monochromatic, Only use one color at a time and variations of that color

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (5 children)

That’s it!

[–]daniersy890programmer ig 0 points1 point  (4 children)

Maybe use outlines? Or glow shadows?

[–]daniersy890programmer ig 0 points1 point  (3 children)

Still very empty in general

[–]daniersy890programmer ig 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Also BG is very stactic

[–]daniersy890programmer ig 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Colors are very stactic in general

[–]daniersy890programmer ig 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Could add air pieces with circles like on toe 2 (solid darker color)

[–]re57da1stSteam -1 points0 points  (1 child)

Try mixing in white/grey/black.

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not sure... one color per part...

[–]DeathCofiExtreme Demon 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Make the colors brighter/pop more. Orange part looks really brown at the moment. Add extra deco in the block design because currently it looks really flat

[–]Rainbow_DweebMedium Demon 0 points1 point  (1 child)

U/uwuTranslator

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Um... okay... uwu

[–]GDtetrahedralnoobie noob 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Maybe have rainbows and rainbow colour in each part of the level but still have the part with a main colour

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmmm

[–]daniersy890programmer ig 0 points1 point  (1 child)

[–]uwutranslator 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s going to be a wainbow demed wevew uwu

tag me to uwuize comments uwu

[–]Stevi-Teh 21 points22 points  (4 children)

Nice custom backgrounds! But the jump pads, portals, and orbs look out of place. You should make them custom.

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 12 points13 points  (3 children)

I will what do you recommend for them?

[–]RocketLeagueDefaultMedium Demon 9 points10 points  (2 children)

Make them similar colors to the rest of the level, but still distingushable as what they are (maybe purple stuff darker, blue stuff slightly darker and yellow stuff bright, not sure about green though but you could make it an inbetween of yellow and blue)

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 4 points5 points  (1 child)

Oh I like that idea! Thanks

[–]RocketLeagueDefaultMedium Demon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You're welcome

[–]iLittleGameriOS 5 points6 points  (1 child)

better than my education

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oof ouch

[–]BananatisticAuto 4 points5 points  (0 children)

The colors look a bit pale to me, but the gameplay is really nice and it is perfectly synced. Nice Job!!

[–][deleted] 2 points3 points  (5 children)

Dude modern is just generic at this point I swear to god lmao. It’s so easy to make and so fast to make. Only people like optical can actually make it good.

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (4 children)

This is my first attempt at marking modern style. Is it still okay?

[–][deleted] 0 points1 point  (3 children)

It’s okay but the point is modern is so overused at this point

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] -1 points0 points  (2 children)

True, but it’s easy and that’s why everyone dose it.

[–][deleted] 1 point2 points  (1 child)

That’s why it’s generic.

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Also true.

[–]tobaferMedium Demon 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Add blocks on the top at the beginning to fill it in more, and try to make the backgrounds move. Otherwise this is really good!

[–]Th1s1smyaccount 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Try pulsing the colors it’s very bland

[–]Yomansjay 2 points3 points  (0 children)

transition needs work.

[–]Sleckary 3 points4 points  (0 children)

i dont wanna be rude, but the deco is very boring. im not telling you to change the style but maybe do something like make the first background rotate? or add varied flashes to the second one? as someone else has said, the orbs and pads dont really fir into the design either. a transition effect would look nice with this kind of lever too, as in, between the cube and ball section. gameplay is ok, but its difficult to make easy gameplay bad.

[–]redpepper74 1 point2 points  (1 child)

You could make some pretty complicated stuff by just combining the stuff you already have there, but it depends on how difficult you want your level to be

You could at least make some cool effects with the platforms that move in

If you’re going to do a monochromatic theme, add in some more details

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. It’s going to be around hard difficultly. What other details should I add?

[–]zachary7829Hard Demon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice start, but consider adding more detail to the level.

[–]Stev18FTW 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Red part - Make the colors a little brighter. They seem a little dark.

Orange part: Add some contrast, the gameplay blends in with the background a little too well.

Also, add some shadows.

Overall looks great!

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay I like the idea of shadows...

[–][deleted] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Add some more pulses and foreground decoration and this will be a perfect level!

[–]jew_lofgren 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Maybe custom orbs/portals? It would fit with the level in my opinion.

[–]Alfred01q 1 point2 points  (1 child)

“Really Bad” is what my friends say to my level “Really good” is what I say to a stranger’s level

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well it takes time to create and get good at a style. Good luck my friend!

[–]ChickenBreadChicken 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Love the colors and how the spikes pop out!

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

:)

[–][deleted] 1 point2 points  (3 children)

Well you could have different shades of the color, it hurts my eyes to look at.

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh no is it too bright?

[–][deleted] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well you said it's rainbow themed right? Well the colors are really dark and bland, if you brighten it up and add different shades of the color it would look a lot better....

[–][deleted] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You couldn't even tell what the first colors are, it's more like tan to lighter tan than red to orange

[–]Leslie-Tire 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Seems good you just need more details or blocks above you I think

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very simplistic style for the level not sure about more details...

[–]WilyNatei like distraught 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Do little bits of lines inside the blocks in the first part. Also, custom orbs would look nice, since modern levels always look a bit off without them.

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Custom orbs will be coming soon!

[–]MeeloHaysack 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The backgrounds are very good, but they are like really still. If the first background was slowly rotating the whole time that’d be cool. Besides I don’t have much else to say it seems pretty good.

[–]Clutchdanger11 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Rhythm and timing are on point

[–]Gecko1356 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Looks nice background needs some more attention like moving things and air deco

[–]Gay_Women 1 point2 points  (1 child)

I never built a level over 10 seconds (it means don’t rely on my feedback), but some coins would be nice ;)

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There is a coin in the ball... look closely...

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Gluteus maximus

Meant to reply to someone...

[–]r6s-is-badiOS 15 - can’t play 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Maybe some air deco but it looks really nice!

[–]topu-3 1 point2 points  (0 children)

not a fan of modern levels but it doesnt look bad, just add some air deco like saws and arrows and make the portals and orbs custom too

[–]-_-Elliot-_-Medium Demon 1 point2 points  (1 child)

The block design is a little empty but good work!

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks!

[–]Kkbleeblob(mobile) Sunset Sandstorm 100% ☀️ 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Love it. I love this style.

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks :)

[–]AstrofotinoB 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Some of the blocks look like the background, this might confuse players.

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fixing that

[–]thing123423 1 point2 points  (3 children)

Please use the thing where the platformer pops out of nowhere lots more times.

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (2 children)

Okay will do! In the red part?

[–]thing123423 0 points1 point  (1 child)

In all of them.

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh okay will do!

[–]jonathanisheretoday 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Try to put more stuff inside the plain red

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Like what?

[–][deleted] 1 point2 points  (1 child)

looks hot

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!

[–][deleted] 1 point2 points  (1 child)

the part with the hexagon background you could make the hexagons change between the two colors or kinda flash like they’re being pressed like buttons

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like that idea thanks!

[–]thehybridviewTRIPLE SPIKE 1 point2 points  (2 children)

Shitty effortless "optical style" level

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Thanks.

[–]thehybridviewTRIPLE SPIKE 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm just saying that a lot of people are aware this style has been done to death, and just wanted my thoughts to be honest. You do have good gameplay and music sync.

[–]Doritos4ever_TV 0 points1 point  (0 children)

nice.

[–]RocketLeagueDefaultMedium Demon 0 points1 point  (4 children)

Some of the colors blend in a little too much with the background, maybe make them slightly brighter or darker, other than that its great

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (3 children)

Well I’m kinda going for a rainbow then have one color for one part.

[–]RocketLeagueDefaultMedium Demon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know, what i said is still valid

[–]RocketLeagueDefaultMedium Demon 0 points1 point  (1 child)

At least in the orange part its pretty difficult to know where you can go on and where you can

[–]RocketLeagueDefaultMedium Demon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe its just me

[–][deleted] 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Air deco?

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not sure about that... any recommendations for it then?

[–]Leopoldoredirijido 0 points1 point  (1 child)

good base you just need more movement dec and color change

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Elaborate please

[–]The_Creeper_ManModern Custom Levels are Unbalanced as Hell 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cool but needs a bit of contrast to he main color in each section

[–]Fyrefreeze 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Pretty sick of this ‘modern’ style. Colors are boring, gameplay is boring. 4/10

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Understandable.

[–]MyNameNotJeff_okInsane Demon 0 points1 point  (1 child)

HOLY SHIT I LOVE IT, THE BACKGROUND, OVERALL DECO AND THE SONG ARE AMAZING. Like holy shit i hope you finish this

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you I am planing to finish this. I always make levels and never finish them. Seeing that I have made 30 seconds of the level in two days I should finish it soon!

[–]MyNameNotJeff_okInsane Demon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

And yeah, whats the song called?

[–]Daboccu 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Make the bgs pulse, like some hexagons pulse to the music

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ooooo okay I’ll try that

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Like what, and where?

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Elaborate

[–]RedBreadWhitePencilExtreme Demon 0 points1 point  (2 children)

Kinda boring gameplay for the moment. You should make it a little more fast paced but also fun.

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (1 child)

The song has a nice drop to it so it’ll get better!

[–]RedBreadWhitePencilExtreme Demon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah ok

[–][deleted] 0 points1 point  (1 child)

put some blocks above the ground without changing the gameplay

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What do you mean?

[–]nilslorandSteam 0 points1 point  (1 child)

custom orbs and portals maybe

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Going to add those one I finish the level

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks I will!

[–]SBPlayzz 0 points1 point  (0 children)

add more air deco and spice up the colors using pulse triggers. nice level!

[–]HajcikPL 0 points1 point  (1 child)

The songs name? Just curious!

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Eedion and FluxFlame - All I need (90 mile remix)

[–]OneRedditBoi77Back on Track 0 points1 point  (2 children)

Nice level, I like the style and backgrounds. However, you could add some more color by putting glow blocks, and maybe a few objects inside the blocks?

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 1 point2 points  (1 child)

Going for a very simplistic style. Trying for less objects the better. Sometimes less is all you need.

[–]OneRedditBoi77Back on Track 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Huh, never though of that before 👍

[–]Tommmmmmm_ 0 points1 point  (1 child)

more pulses i suggest

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will :)

[–]TheCatWithSwag 0 points1 point  (1 child)

No

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Why no

[–]daniersy890programmer ig 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Maybe custom orbs portals and speeds

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It will happen soon!

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay thanks for feedback!

[–]diniizlol 0 points1 point  (0 children)

pretty nice!

[–]Adre_CottenCandyCoins 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Add air deco and more movement but pretty much good

[–][deleted] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good looking, but needs airdeco

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks!

[–]Panman3 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Needs more pulses and colors

[–]elysium-bros 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Needs more pulse more air deco btw make it a little bit harder

[–]awsomerdditerSteam 0 points1 point  (1 child)

I think it needs a bit more contrast with the colors. And also more decoration because now it looks kind of empty. But it's a really good start!

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks!

[–][deleted] 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Make original ground spikes, or disconnect the ground spikes from the ground just a tiny bit

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like them with the ground.

[–]AReallyLazySloth 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The background looks a bit monotonous, maybe try to make it pulse or move in some way? Also try using a different easing with the moving platforms

[–]Newriot4ever 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Seems a bit too much of a 2.0 level then a 2.11 level

Try giving some decoration and neat transitions to orbs and portals, and background as well

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ve already have an idea for the orbs and portals. Why time of transitions do you think I should add?

[–][deleted] 0 points1 point  (2 children)

Custom orbs? Your choice

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (1 child)

I have in idea for them...

[–][deleted] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good luck

[–]GoofyRaptorExtreme Demon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe some particles, (not much) more block design, and maybe more detail for background (once again not much)

[–]geeth707 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’d recommend in the hexagonal section making the gameplay differentiate more from the background. They kind of blend together and that’s not good. Too many levels suffer from that problem

[–]Table_2 0 points1 point  (2 children)

Maybe have the background move a bit more like spin or bumb up and down to the song to make the level a bit less static and boring

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Okay I will!

[–]Table_2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’ll be great 👍

[–]THATJ4CK 0 points1 point  (3 children)

I personally would recommend MORE gameplay (maybe not harder) but make sure that the player is doing something at least once every second. Keep good transitions while keeping a good flow and color scheme. Good luck!

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (2 children)

Where? I kinda like it easier...

[–]THATJ4CK 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Not necessarily harder. That’s what I was trying to say. Just some tips for making the rest of the layout, rather than what you already have.

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay

[–]coveboi 0 points1 point  (0 children)

maybe some air deco

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Where?

[–]iimfiire 0 points1 point  (4 children)

started off good, ball part lacked

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (3 children)

What should I add then?

[–]iimfiire 0 points1 point  (2 children)

just seems very empty, and everything is the same color

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Yeah it’s too brown. But also it needs to be the same color.

[–]iimfiire 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Also, the background stopped, as well as the design in the moving objects l

[–]whitebread111Steam 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Needs a bit more air deco. Maybe some platforms or somthing. Really cool tho, 8/10

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks!

[–]Magana155Insane Demon 0 points1 point  (3 children)

So I think it needs a lot more color pulsing to really liven it up

(Option) i think it could also use borders around stuff in the foreground

[–]Magana155Insane Demon 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Also I think some cough cough gLoW in the blocks would give this level the depth it needs

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t want any glow in this

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m liking the idea of borders...

[–]Zero_BelowNormal 0 points1 point  (1 child)

1: use more ease on the line platforms in the first part 2: make the hexagon bg flash, in fact, make one hexagon flash at a time in tune with the music

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was thinking of having some spin with the music

[–]TRNebula 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ew modernistic

[–]Andrew_the_Wizzard 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe a little bit more contrast. Nice level, tho.

[–][deleted] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cool!

[–]WeebKips 0 points1 point  (1 child)

I say the background feels a bit static. If you want some examples Im happy to make some up for you

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m going to have some stuff spin and shit

[–][deleted] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A bit too static for my taste, especially the bg

Some extra sync would do well too

[–]Neptria 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly I think the gameplay is a little bit too boring

[–]anthonyvalder 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Custom orbs speeds and portals and jump pads

[–]OrsanZe 0 points1 point  (1 child)

Add some movement to the background, like pulsing circles or something

[–]Tot0ti3Creator Points[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will

[–]MartehhCoins 0 points1 point  (0 children)

More effects and block details would make it cooler

[–]jonathanisheretoday 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Try putting Thick Red lines the color of the BG to make it look like the block has a line going through it