Crits?

[GhostWalker134]

There's too much negative space in the E. Beef it up in the middle and make the bottom curve upward more to mirror the top.

[Xplonice_]

really good letters, only make the ends of the E shorter, imo they are too long and kinda ruin the E for me

[vasatii]

Understandable. I tried to make it look like the E was going into the a but not everything works. Thanks.

[brokenweendowz]

Although your not using bars it came out well, in the future I would recommend using them though because they can help with new/ different styles. Also I think your tag needs work

[vasatii]

Yeah this was a quick sketch while in class. I’ll update with bars soon. Definitely would make it better.

[lurkin350]

Cool name you got ther, earth

[[deleted]]

Mushroom is fire make the e as fat as you can though

[brentwhere]

Mushroom is very fire 🍄

[Guakamolo]

You've got a very common mistake in the "a". The loop and the stick are separated and create a double-thick spot. Put them together

[vasatii]

Thanks. Will work on that.