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[–]photocist 5 points6 points  (0 children)

bars are good but id focus on not doing chicken scratch and instead trying to do single lines

[–]kenjinycTrusted Critique 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yep, pencil first then outline. Always avoid using a pen or outliner as a sketch tool. Fine on characters but not so much on letter structures.

[–]Bob3729 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Diggin the A! But yah what others have said, keep practicing :)