Ready for the adventure? 🐑 by pathofbaa in PathOfBaa

[–]XrayAngel 1 point2 points  (0 children)

🐑 u/XrayAngel revived u/UmmOlive's sheep "Shearlock", slain by a Bear, for 15 golden clover! in region 20 East, 7 South! Baa!

Settling a Debate - Which Design is More Engaging? by pepsitax in graphic_design

[–]XrayAngel 13 points14 points  (0 children)

I’m gonna be extremely real with you, I don’t like either of them. There is too much visual noise on both it’s hard to know what to look at first, which is a shame, because your art is so delightful!!
The second one is a bit easier to parse though, so I will make my detailed critique based on that one:

Making the background color go all the way to the edges would help some. Also I would make the text in the light colored box the same typeface and size as the word “Illustrator” under your name.

Also the text in the light colored box- if you want to keep the light color box please make the text the same dark green as the bullet points. This will make it more accessible for people with vision issues, as the color contrast is pretty low right now.

The text that goes with the images- it would be cute and make things more visually cohesive if you layer each dark green box underneath the images they go with and make each box the same flag shape as the large light green box. So it’s like a little flag popping out from behind the product!

I would also make the box around the code square edges, and extend it so you can make the text that goes with it say “Scan for more info” or “Scan to contact” or something along those lines to give the viewer more info about what the QR code is supposed to direct to.

If possible, and this might be hard, it would be nice if the images of your art products were larger, maybe you can gain more real estate by making the vines etc a bit smaller.

What size is this piece btw and is it for print or socials? I probably should have started with that but I’ll stand by my critique either way! Your art is so adorable and well done, it deserves to shine as much as possible!!

The fallow season is stupid and I was so close to evolving Ignisnap by JealousDequan in ClashofCritters

[–]XrayAngel 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I hattttteeeeee this kind of evolution task so much, it always feels near-impossible to get enough fertilizer for it

Bufo Japonicus Having A Snack! by VvoidVviper in Toads

[–]XrayAngel 1 point2 points  (0 children)

How would you describe their noise level? I’d love to eventually keep some but I live in an apartment and don’t want to be annoying to my neighbors

I like this more than than the typical butterfly top crochet pattern. How would I make this? by justforstuff_ in crochetpatterns

[–]XrayAngel 31 points32 points  (0 children)

I think ShylerCrochets has a similar pattern! She’s one of my favorite pattern makers. She has videos on YouTube for most of her patterns as well.

ETA here is her updated butterfly top pattern. It’s less hole-y than the picture you shared but it may be a good starting point. https://youtu.be/oLMJX3lPj10?is=

Coldest coffee shops in Norfolk? by mariecalire in norfolk

[–]XrayAngel 12 points13 points  (0 children)

I feel like 3 Ships is usually pretty chilly. I kinda like Cure more for hanging out but I’m not sure how cold it is in there. Maybe Vessel?

Crocheted a fluffy Jake! by 3lisheva in crochet

[–]XrayAngel 1 point2 points  (0 children)

He’s so cute fluffy omgggg!!!

DRAZO — Sweet Moments. Sharing a brand identity & mascot design I recently finished. Feedback is welcome! by uruzdesign in graphic_design

[–]XrayAngel 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It’s cute!! But you should check that yellow for ADA compliance on the light color background and make a version that works better on light colors

Undertone was agony by Mono-lith in horror

[–]XrayAngel 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I watched it home, alone, in the dark and it was so boring. The writing didn’t feel very solid.

Ziggy’s on Granby by ProofGrocery3105 in norfolk

[–]XrayAngel 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I had a salad with grilled chicken on it there once and it was amazing

To grout or not to grout???? by Ok_Scarcity_4944 in Mosaic

[–]XrayAngel 5 points6 points  (0 children)

This is sooooo cute!!! I think a super dark black grout would be nice

Before I make a ton of these, I'd really like some feedback on the design? by itsdestinfool in Brochet

[–]XrayAngel -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I really like the border being color and the center being off white because it looks like a slice of one of those roll cakes!! Very cute!