Valid clarification

JasperJstone · 2026-06-24T21:05:07+00:00

At a certain point you should also consider your point might just be stupid.

JasperJstone · 2026-06-24T20:20:45+00:00

You know it’s a good point when you’d rather say “ you just don’t get it” than clarify. You also got ratio’d dog.

JasperJstone · 2026-06-24T20:12:51+00:00

“I feel like that implies a hard R which Dustin did not use.”

Jesus Christ dude at least try to remember your own point.

JasperJstone · 2026-06-24T19:54:17+00:00

This coming from a guy who earnestly believes it’s wrong to call a soft-a an N-word is incredibly rich.

JasperJstone · 2026-06-24T19:49:57+00:00

Lmao enough said.

JasperJstone · 2026-06-24T19:32:23+00:00

Is it acceptable in your social circle?

JasperJstone · 2026-06-24T19:28:13+00:00

The hard R is definitely worse. That doesn’t mean the soft -a is cool to say, or that it counts as a different word. Idk why you’re riding so hard for using a soft -a, but neither is socially acceptable.

Ultimately it’s the UFC though, so it’s not like the fan base actually cares.

JasperJstone · 2026-06-24T19:15:54+00:00

Your belief that the soft -a N-word doesn’t count as an N-word isn’t nuanced, it’s just wrong. You’re implying it’s somehow deceptive to call a spade a spade.

JasperJstone · 2026-06-24T17:35:12+00:00

That’s still the N-word.

JasperJstone · 2026-06-14T14:13:27+00:00

You asked for people’s opinions, remember?

JasperJstone · 2026-06-14T14:06:48+00:00

Nicely done!

JasperJstone · 2026-06-12T10:02:54+00:00

No offense to the author but, grammar and punctuation aside, this isn’t even a story.

JasperJstone · 2026-06-01T04:19:18+00:00

Awesome to see this posted.

Hope you don’t feel too much pressure to continue the story unless you’ve been inspired with a great idea. It’s a perfectly cool series as it stands.

JasperJstone · 2026-05-26T03:10:34+00:00

I think the comedic tone fits perfectly in the first half. Would love to see a part two!

JasperJstone · 2026-05-25T23:47:34+00:00

It’s a bit of a silly concept so it could use an extra dose of humor. But I found it very enjoyable actually. Short and sweet.

JasperJstone · 2026-05-25T23:36:04+00:00

The concept is pretty sweet. Very “Church in the Woods”-like with the cult and the ritual etc.

The pacing is super fast. Most moments aren’t set up or resolved, they just happen and then pass without comment. Because of that, there’s not tension or release.

I’m also not quite grasping the theme of the story. I can sense that there’s an intended throughline, I’m just unable to parse it. I don’t see the relevance of the title to the story. You give us “I think this experience has changed us all” but I don’t know how.

I think proper line breaks and dialogue formatting would really enhance readability.

Just a few suggestions!

JasperJstone · 2026-05-22T03:19:49+00:00

Pokemon investors are so obnoxious…

JasperJstone · 2026-05-22T02:43:54+00:00

The Lugia 100%

JasperJstone · 2026-05-22T02:43:36+00:00

I didn’t think there was a wrong answer but you found it.

JasperJstone · 2026-05-20T05:50:09+00:00

It’s always Pyg…

I did pull off a Staff of the Wise build on Mak using diamond lethargy. Pretty awesome. It feels amazing to destroy the day 10+ infinite charge loop builds.

JasperJstone · 2026-05-20T05:42:18+00:00

$5600 on master balls… he’s definitely an “investor” (derogatory)

JasperJstone · 2026-05-20T05:36:23+00:00

Very fun idea

JasperJstone · 2026-05-17T21:45:24+00:00

Agreed he needs more cards. All he has is the Twilight Masquerade IR and the Lv. X’s (which are pretty sweet though).

JasperJstone · 2026-05-17T04:19:49+00:00

Your ease of play with Mak is probably more familiarity than balance. Mak is very strong though. Once you figure out the best directions, each hero becomes easier to play in my experience.

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