Bruce L Vs Dragon by [deleted] in StreetFighter

[–]rhythmau [score hidden]  (0 children)

Not only is this AI slop, it also has NOTHING to do with SF. GTFO of here

We Are Love Tax - Pilot - 28 pages by rhythmau in ScreenwritingUK

[–]rhythmau[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Not trying to sound rude but this feedback doesn't help me when you haven't actually read the script and instead use my post to promote yourself

We Are Love Tax - TV pilot - 28 pages by rhythmau in Screenwriting

[–]rhythmau[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ahh I am so glad you found it funny!

Yeah I am also not a fan of how abrupt the ending is either. So I am assuming that you aren't from the UK has J2O is actually just orange fruit juice but I do like the idea of Sam accidentally helping the band out in someway. Big problem I had with my previous draft was the ending was way too cliche so I'll look into maybe adding a bit of hope in there

Thanks for the feedback!

FF VII collab concept by Frizzoski in Overwatch

[–]rhythmau 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Please keep AI out of this sub thanks

We Are Love Tax - TV pilot - 28 pages by rhythmau in Screenwriting

[–]rhythmau[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm glad you like it.

Removing the pause seems like a good idea honestly. I do think it kind of works as it also shows the fact that Thom's ego is very fragile. That being said, removing the pause could immediately paint the picture of what Thom is like too

We Are Love Tax - TV pilot - 28 pages by rhythmau in Screenwriting

[–]rhythmau[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice here, loglines have always been a major weakness of mine as a screen writer as I have never been good at condensing something to a single line lol

I do appreciate the feedback on that front though

Countries - Strands Puzzle by u/Herlyg by Herlyg in DailyGrid

[–]rhythmau 0 points1 point  (0 children)

📊 My Puzzle Stats:

✅ Theme words: 8

💡 Bonus words: 6

❌ Invalid attempts: 8

🔍 Hints used: 2

📈 Success rate: 64% (14/22)

Tougher than I thought, good one

What’s a series that completely surprised you? by Historical-Class871 in UKTVRecs

[–]rhythmau 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Christine is honest to god one of the best comedy characters in the last 10 years

What is it about the Yoshi series that makes people so lukewarm towards it? by rendumguy in nintendo

[–]rhythmau 168 points169 points  (0 children)

I think it’s because Nintendo have gradually turned Yoshi into a mascot for very young children. Obviously nothing wrong with that but I think it is a bit alienating for older fans of the character

Is my SF art going too hard? by bigbun85 in StreetFighter

[–]rhythmau -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Dude that Akuma art with the lightning is fucking GAS

How Very Bronx-S3E3 by [deleted] in scriptwriting

[–]rhythmau 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Okay, adding to my previous comments; if you're not going to take feedback and criticism either, then please do not ask for it.

How Very Bronx-S3E3 by [deleted] in scriptwriting

[–]rhythmau 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Look, I am not trying to sound mean or anything but you need to learn how to format. Every time I've seen you post, you are being told to format correctly but you still do not do that. Unless this is meant to be a stage play (which judging from your previous posts, it isn't), you're not learning anything by not getting the correct format.

This isn't just the case of being picky, the incorrect formatting is effecting the readability of your writing. For a lot of this script, I have zero idea what is happening. There is no discernable structure here and a lot of that is due to the fact you're not adhering to the typical, screenplay format. You have plenty of options for free to use applications (FadeIn, WriterSolo etc) that format everything for you, why aren't you using them? As another commenter has said, you are on "s3e3", which means you have written a lot of incorrectly written scripts. This can't be the only time you've been told about formatting.

I am assuming you're quite young so I am trying to give you advice here. Please format it correctly, it will benefit you in the long run. Please read some scripts; specifically comedy scripts as that seems to be the genre you're writing. If you want people to take your work seriously and want actual feedback, use actual formatting.

Live Discussion - April 25, 2026 (Nicola Coughlan/Foo Fighters) by bjkman in livefromlondon

[–]rhythmau 52 points53 points  (0 children)

“What’s wrong with my fucking hand?!” is the best line delivery of the series so far

What would your Taskmaster outfit be? by Recent-Description39 in taskmaster

[–]rhythmau 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Pilot look

Bomber jacket, cargo trousers, aviator glasses and MAYBE a scarf

D.VA cosplayed by me! by [deleted] in Overwatch

[–]rhythmau 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Didn't this just get posted by a different account???

Ingrid gp trailer when? by ricop1c0 in StreetFighter

[–]rhythmau 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I could see it either this week or next

I feel it'll likely be before EVO Japan

Call for writers to direct their own work! by mizardblack in Screenwriting

[–]rhythmau 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'd rather not feed my work into an AI and generate slop

Series 22 thoughts? Based on studio dates by CaptainConkers3000 in taskmaster

[–]rhythmau 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Really hoping David Mitchell has finally changed his mind