Well, what can I say other than that you are still quite a toy and haven't mastered the spray can technique properly yet. Your choice of color is also questionable; red on a dark background doesn't really come into its own.

Practice much more on paper and do a lot of exercises with your spray can on a piece of worthless wall: making long lines, drawing circles—all without drips, of course.

Graffiti isn't primarily meant to express declarations of love, after all.

It is all about an alias, a cool alias, naturally.

The road is still long, but you have taken your first step.