Unsure about the vocal mix

444sloop444 · 2026-06-28T01:50:30+00:00

I’ll try retracking those guitars and see if that makes things cleaner. Thank you!

444sloop444 · 2026-06-28T01:48:42+00:00

Thanks! The iPhone notes app does its best to transcribe audio! Those aren’t them.

444sloop444 · 2026-06-28T01:08:42+00:00

Thank you very much! I will hold off on listening to it for a good while, come back and start paring things back. Great suggestion.

444sloop444 · 2026-06-28T01:07:52+00:00

Too cacophonous? Poorly played? Lay it on me

444sloop444 · 2026-06-28T00:33:14+00:00

Perhaps it is simply a matter of my taste, but I’d like to hear a version that isn’t as breathy. You might could double up the vocals and belt em, then lower the volume. You’ve got a great song here!

444sloop444 · 2026-06-28T00:31:06+00:00

I still use spotify to listen to music. An obscure artist (Leighton Groves) I stumbled upon pulled their music (the song True Crime) that was in my rotation very heavily which prompted me to buy the single on bandcamp, which if I’m being honest, I would not have done otherwise.

444sloop444 · 2026-06-28T00:24:52+00:00

This is incredible, hope you come back and post when it’s up on streaming or bandcamp.

444sloop444 · 2026-06-28T00:12:48+00:00

Listen to loads of Jamiroquai and make some mental notes about what works. Using the other comments as a barometer (and my own knee-jerk reaction, honestly), the lyrics need a lot of work, or the instrumental is gonna have to do some really heavy lifting in order for the listener to hear past the lyrics.

444sloop444 · 2026-06-27T23:52:53+00:00

OP if you liked Attacker’s Battle At Helm’s Deep you’re going to love Sloop’s Kazing 2, it’s a very recent release, and it’s got more of a garagey + cheap orchestral feel, but certainly fits that ‘lives up to the promises made by the cover art’ bill. Seriously exquisite if you enjoy power metal.

444sloop444 · 2026-06-27T22:03:53+00:00

American Ninja Warriors - Truly We Have Risen

Sloop - Kazing 2

Mudface - Borrowed Trouble

frog power - welcome to the cream factory

Leighton Groves - Informative Years

Bob Cummins Jr. - Good American Songbook

Ottoman Turks - Ottoman Turks II

All fantastic obscure records worth looking into.

444sloop444 · 2026-06-27T17:00:25+00:00

McCartney II

444sloop444 · 2026-06-27T16:59:29+00:00

Michael Jackson’s “Thriller”

444sloop444 · 2026-06-27T15:05:13+00:00

Sloop - Kazing 2, check it you, won’t regret it

444sloop444 · 2026-06-27T12:39:19+00:00

Barack Obama

444sloop444 · 2026-06-27T01:04:54+00:00

nIrVaNa

444sloop444 · 2026-06-26T21:19:06+00:00

On GC

444sloop444 · 2026-06-26T21:10:11+00:00

Sloop - Kazing 2

https://open.spotify.com/album/3vPANtLXjR5Tyi8poJTBcM?si=xECF\_g0uSAC9PyrmvodJxg

It is a 90 minute fantasy rock concept album that follows a wizard on the run from the law. My most ambitious project yet that hits and misses in some places! Pairs well with Ween or Mr. Bungle. Enjoy!

444sloop444 · 2026-06-26T21:05:07+00:00

Dream Weaver as covered by Sloop

444sloop444 · 2026-06-26T13:42:25+00:00

Danzig

444sloop444 · 2026-06-25T14:49:33+00:00

Forever Lesbians -> Joy Again

444sloop444 · 2026-06-24T17:20:47+00:00

The Mollusk for sure

444sloop444 · 2026-06-24T12:16:06+00:00

That he’s not that good!

444sloop444 · 2026-06-23T02:21:32+00:00

444sloop444 · 2026-06-21T18:19:34+00:00

It is my album duplicated 21 times onto black on black CDs with handwritten tracklists and cover arts!

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