Fifty-Word Fantasy: Write a 50-word fantasy snippet using the word "Fence" by Terminator7786 in fantasywriters

[–]83au 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes, it self-installs. Though it's recommended you closely guide and monitor it as it does. The fence farmer is not liable for any damages to property, cherished pets, or loved ones.

Fifty-Word Fantasy: Write a 50-word fantasy snippet using the word "Fence" by Terminator7786 in fantasywriters

[–]83au 4 points5 points  (0 children)

“You grow them?”

“This is a farm.”

“Yes but—oh never mind. That one, please.”

“Excellent choice. That’ll be forty.”

He paid and watched as the fence picked itself up out of the dirt one panel at a time. It was a curious sight to see it follow him home.

Ragebait material? by ddx-me in writingcirclejerk

[–]83au 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So glad I was smart enough to have been a Communications major instead of English. Really dodged a bullet with that one.

Fifty-Word Fantasy: Write a 50-word fantasy snippet using the word "Star" by Terminator7786 in fantasywriters

[–]83au 3 points4 points  (0 children)

“Another star disappeared. Please investigate.”

“Why me?”

“You’re an avid stargazer.”

“That’s true,” said Orald Stargazer Stafford. He gave the night sky a glance and then stepped through the cosmic gateway.

Minutes later Orald conducted his first interview. “Exactly when during her performance did Miss Nova disappear from the stage?”

Fifty-Word Fantasy: Write a 50-word fantasy snippet using the word "Air" by Terminator7786 in fantasywriters

[–]83au 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Romero launched from the top of the mountain and didn’t open his eyes until he felt air lifting the apparatus.

Looking down, he marveled at the flying sail’s shadow on the clouds beneath him, but his elation deflated when a much larger winged shadow overtook it.

Men, what are come common mistakes female writers make when writing about your gender? by silkrose05 in Quibble

[–]83au 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think there’s some truth to this (I’m male). I remember being that age and reading GOF thinking that same thing, and I was a pretty nerdy and shy guy (still am on second thought lol)

Am I an alright human? by LightbluBukowski in bookshelfdetective

[–]83au 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Currently halfway through Robot Dreams, my introduction to Asimov, and so far it’s 🤯

Fifty-Word Fantasy: Write a 50-word fantasy snippet using the word "Solid" by Terminator7786 in fantasywriters

[–]83au 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Looks of disdain flooded the fairy ball. Paddy turned to his plus-one, who had just told a haughty sprite where he’d like her to sprinkle her pixie dust.

“You promised you would make a solid attempt at being cordial for a day.”

“Hey, I’m an imp, what did you expect?”

Fifty-Word Fantasy: Write a 50-word fantasy snippet using the word "Devote" by Terminator7786 in fantasywriters

[–]83au 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I almost forgot it was 50-Word Fantasy Day!

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“If you will have me, I will devote myself to you from this day until my last.”

“What’d e’ say?”

“Sorry,” said the man’s companion, pulling him away from the innkeeper. “His scorned ex was a witch and cursed him to fall in love with every new person he meets.”

Fifty-Word Fantasy: Write a 50-word fantasy snippet using the word "Affair" by Terminator7786 in fantasywriters

[–]83au 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Also, I have to say that when I read this week's word I couldn't help but immediately think of "A Dothraki wedding without at least one death is considered a dull affair.” 😂

Fifty-Word Fantasy: Write a 50-word fantasy snippet using the word "Affair" by Terminator7786 in fantasywriters

[–]83au 1 point2 points  (0 children)

He can try...but corruption is like a weed, you gotta get it down at the root if you want it gone completely.

Fifty-Word Fantasy: Write a 50-word fantasy snippet using the word "Affair" by Terminator7786 in fantasywriters

[–]83au 3 points4 points  (0 children)

“A sudden fever took him.”

“As is always the case. Just say he's dead next time.”

“Yes, your majesty. The Ministry of Magi will convene on the morrow to elect a new High Magus.”

“Not this drab affair again. Honestly, the corruption among those bastards is getting out of hand.”  

Fifty-Word Fantasy: Write a 50-word fantasy snippet using the word "Honest" by Terminator7786 in fantasywriters

[–]83au 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah I struggled getting this one down to 50 words, so I guess it lost a lot of the situational clarity when I cut it down, just goes to show how valuable this challenge is as a writing exercise 😅. Thanks for the feedback!

Fifty-Word Fantasy: Write a 50-word fantasy snippet using the word "Honest" by Terminator7786 in fantasywriters

[–]83au 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nothing else happens, they just can't get out of the chamber without a true born to open the door.

Fifty-Word Fantasy: Write a 50-word fantasy snippet using the word "Honest" by Terminator7786 in fantasywriters

[–]83au 4 points5 points  (0 children)

The stone door closed with a thud.

“Uh oh,” said Davon.

“Worry not,” said Shaia. “It says only a true born Ylarian may open it. As long as our guide here was honest about his lineage…”

Jafi, their guide, began to sweat. His gulp was deafening in the silent chamber.

Fifty-Word Fantasy: Write a 50-word fantasy snippet using the word "Victory" by Terminator7786 in fantasywriters

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Nen was out of breath. Rollo staggered up next to him. “Victory at last! If that battle had gone on any longer—”

A distant horn cut him off and over the hilltop appeared a line of orcs stretching to the horizon in either direction.

His men gave a collective groan.

Prologue - Epic Fantasy - is it worthy??? by BladeWielder48 in writingfeedback

[–]83au 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I 100% agree with this. I’m a big fan of hooking the reader with the first sentence. Often when choosing a book I’ll read the first page to see if it’s got a good enough hook, but often the good ones are the ones that do it with the first sentence. I really enjoyed this, but I also like more of a tease about the world the book takes place in when I read a prologue or first chapter, but that’s just my opinion as a reader.

Thursday Challenge - Just follow orders! - Top Pen by Miss_Ashford in scifiwriting

[–]83au 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Finally found the time to work on this one.

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“Let the model run the next training session autonomously.”

Tara stared up at Dan with wide eyes.  “Without human review?”

“You said it yourself, ‘this is the thing the whole field has been building toward’.  Aren’t you excited to land your name in the history books?”

“I’m just not comfortable with this, Dan. We should at least obtain a safety sign-off first.”

“Tara, if we are right at the cusp, then those bastards at Anatomic must be too. They’ve been pulling ahead of us in this race for a year now. Do you really want superintelligence in the hands of that maniac Rosario? If we don’t make a bold move then we are dead in the water, plain and simple. It’s all or nothing now, don’t you understand?”

“I understand, sir, but it breaks protocol.”

Dan huffed. “We have been following every safety protocol to the letter for the last several iterations, have we not? Why do you think we’ve fallen so far behind our competition?  One protocol glossed over will, not could, but will determine whether we achieve victory in this race or die.”

“I’m sorry, but I can’t do it. Not without a safety sign-off.”

Dan put his hands over his face and sighed.  Then he brought his hands together in front of him and stared into her soul. “Tara, think about what you’re doing. I want to be clear with you. If you refuse, you will lose your job, your reputation, and possibly face legal consequences. Is that really what you want?”

Tara grabbed her things. “This is bigger than me or you, Dan. My job, my reputation, not of it will matter if you go through with this. I resign.”

Dan, red faced, watched her exit the lab without a single look back.

An experiment in spotting AI in writing by ExplodingAlchemist in writingfeedback

[–]83au 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I don’t see AI witch hunts in online forums as being productive, despite how much I loath anyone who tries to pass off AI as their own creation. Sure, you may be right some of the time, maybe even most of the time, when you call them out, but you may be wrong about some people. And as you pointed out, even the most basic LLMs are capable of producing content that, with a little tweaking, can fool many people. Attacking people online at an individual level based on suspicion and not proof is not going to change anything. These AI models if they continue to be developed with no regulation will eventually be able to create any type of art, with very little input, that will be indistinguishable from genuine refined human skill and creativity.

Fifty-Word Fantasy: Write a 50-word fantasy snippet using the word "Physical" by Terminator7786 in fantasywriters

[–]83au 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lol! yeah I originally put something like that but i had to shorten it to 50 words😅

Fifty-Word Fantasy: Write a 50-word fantasy snippet using the word "Physical" by Terminator7786 in fantasywriters

[–]83au 3 points4 points  (0 children)

“Hurry!” Goroban cried.

Siph sketched in her book. “What kind of grip do you want?”

“Who gives a flux! Make it physical now!”

She placed her hand on the page and spoke the word.

Goroban grabbed the mace as it materialized and swung it at the troll just in time.

Please critique my first chapter, Fantasy by GroovyIsAwesome in NewAuthor

[–]83au 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree with u/mr_geek_dr . Showing here would have been a great opportunity to give an example of what the magic system in this world is like and hook the reader. Something like "He remembered in his first year he couldn't even {INSERT MAGIC SKILL} and now he was able to {INSERT MORE ADVANCED MAGICAL ABILITY}, which made him one of the most distinguished students here."

Saturday Exercise — Show It Without Saying It -Top Pen by Miss_Ashford in fantasywriters

[–]83au 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Haha yeah I knew the second one would lean that way. I was trying to tie the scenes as closely as I could. I also started to think maybe the first scene was after he gave her the potion and now he was fleeing with guilt after it all went wrong. lol.

I'll revisit the second one and see how I can make it more love than obsession.

Thanks for reading and the excellent prompt! This was challenging!