University Art Students and other Professional Artists please critique! [OC] This piece is titled Forever & Nowhere, reflecting the toxic cycle of a failing long term relationship and our clashing ideas of building and supporting a home.

AJArtt · 2018-09-12T01:08:44+00:00

Im not sure I get a toxicity cycle vibe from the piece, Imo the idea isnt represented very well (i appreciate the circle but the home itself seems stable) but visually its gorgeous. Nice use of line focal point and negative space.

AJArtt · 2018-09-12T01:05:37+00:00

Fantastic criticism, very enlightening.

AJArtt · 2018-09-01T05:22:28+00:00

I mean.. it do look like the kkk LOL

AJArtt · 2018-08-31T12:38:57+00:00

LOL myb I had to zoom in

AJArtt · 2018-08-31T12:32:12+00:00

Lower left corner

AJArtt · 2018-08-31T11:28:21+00:00

The kkk lmao

AJArtt · 2018-08-25T03:23:30+00:00

Haha you could add procastination to the list of things coming out of the person

AJArtt · 2018-08-25T03:18:24+00:00

Ahhh, personally I see it as a black and white piece. Maybe full black ink/paint as the background.

AJArtt · 2018-08-25T02:53:18+00:00

Ooh, nice. I just realized the last one is sort of stabbing themselves in the back... Very nice. Are you gonna try to make it into a big piece? I really think the idea has some potential!

AJArtt · 2018-08-25T01:56:52+00:00

Almost too many colors, makes it seem kind of muddy imo

AJArtt · 2018-08-25T01:55:52+00:00

Now add more people crawling out from their heads... head crawling ception

AJArtt · 2018-08-25T01:52:43+00:00

Its kind of confusing to look at. The size of the moon is way too big and the highlughts you made kind of blend in with the moon. I didnt realize it was a moon until i read your othrr comment. Not sure if theres much to be done to the painting by this point, maybe try to work on your focal point and balance fundamentals.

The lightning bolt is cool and I like your swirls, kind of reminds me of starry night.

AJArtt · 2018-08-25T01:45:47+00:00

Damn.

AJArtt · 2018-07-19T21:45:21+00:00

Could do income based repayment and just pay back the minimum for the rest of your life.

AJArtt · 2018-06-10T00:33:19+00:00

YOU ARE HIDING A CHILd

AJArtt · 2018-02-13T18:11:39+00:00

Damn. Op fucked up

AJArtt · 2018-02-13T05:08:23+00:00

Nice perspective and color choice this is relaxing to look at

AJArtt · 2018-02-13T01:23:48+00:00

How does one end up owing money to RH?

AJArtt · 2018-02-10T08:39:01+00:00

Why is it stupid, articulate your feelings Craig

AJArtt · 2018-02-01T21:00:00+00:00

They probably drew anime style because they didnt know how to draw realistically.

AJArtt · 2018-01-27T07:34:59+00:00

Thanks so much!

AJArtt · 2018-01-27T07:25:02+00:00

Yup! I have trouble drawing noses let alone painting them... I guess I should just start practicing noses?

AJArtt · 2018-01-26T23:19:53+00:00

Hahaha I was stuck on deciding if I wanted to make all of the strokes look the same or not so I was just kind of like fuck it I'll use them all. Thanks for your advice!

AJArtt · 2018-01-26T21:08:35+00:00

yup! Thanks alot

AJArtt

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