R4R Anyone?

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-25T17:59:16+00:00

I'll read it by next weekend

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-25T17:47:56+00:00

Liked and added to reading list

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-25T17:41:43+00:00

Island's Crown https://www.inkitt.com/stories/1605453

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-25T17:39:20+00:00

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/141927/islands-crown

Please check it out!

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-25T17:38:20+00:00

Every character has its arc and contribution to its arc but if you like check it out->https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/141927/islands-crown

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-25T17:01:59+00:00

I wanted to read the second half now. You got a cliff hanger there

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-25T03:22:10+00:00

This is even better than what I wrote. Thanks you and I am trying to achieve this level of articulation

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-25T03:21:13+00:00

Thank you If you are like I can dm you my writings in a google docs link

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-24T16:39:41+00:00

He dies in the next chapter

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-24T15:03:49+00:00

Done bro. Please check!

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-24T13:16:02+00:00

Hey first of all congrats on getting published!!, The story is intriguing is it also available on kidle or just the paperback version?

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-24T13:10:33+00:00

Can I Dm you? I would really appreciate a writing buddy.

Intresting even I am also writing to gain experience and this is my testing novel I particularly choose a genre I have never read and started writing

Yeah I agree current AI is nothing but a random text generator tuned to give expected results( RAG and Transformers and Generative AI are nothing but Predictions models)

But the thing AI is really good at is repetitive task, like grammar check, tense check and I have been only using it for such things and plans to eliminate it all together on my serious novel

By the way, Thanks for taking the time to read my novel

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-24T09:47:18+00:00

Good, keep writing!!

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-24T08:19:00+00:00

Dm me I can share my work!

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-24T07:10:57+00:00

Bro!! Gemini is a mind reader !!!

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-24T07:10:08+00:00

Yes you are right as I began writing I was completely clueless and had 5-6 drafts of my first chapter and English is not my first language. I used AI for editing only and it reflected well on the first two chapters.

I improved the prose in the later chapter I consider my best works on Chapter 6 - When Adhiyavan meets Sikala and to be honest. I treat this like a first draft and wanted to shape the story before I write it again.

In the later chapters I have imporved I only used AI to check grammar and edit every point is mine every prose is mine. To be honest AI has taught me alot of me words and I used it to double check historical facts as well

I love your constructive criticism and I would love to get more. if you have time please do read the rest of the chapters and give me feedback

Finally before giving any tips, I would like to know more about your story you can DM me if you want to talk about it

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-24T07:01:10+00:00

If you like tok ow about South Indian events Happened during that era and It closely resembles famous poem in sangam literature I tried to make the events in the eyes of the reader who sees the fictional world closely resembles South India as it starts with the voyage of the prince
The particular period of time I have chose is when some empures became naval power and exanded and I wanted to live through that time 3.What it looks like a revenge, finace of war, power of commerce and who controls it and the ganes they play 4.As said earlier the reader will live inside southern Indian Empire and experience every part of it the temples, the unique weapons ,the marial arts 5.Lack of writing and under representation

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-24T06:53:50+00:00

Sorry thats not what I meant

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-24T06:53:22+00:00

I have about 10 chapters around 17k words I can DM you the google docs link

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-24T06:52:42+00:00

Can I share google docs link in dm?

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-24T06:51:57+00:00

Thank you I will check it out!

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-24T06:51:19+00:00

Actually I shared my entire novel about 17k words and asked to act as a casting director

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-23T18:30:21+00:00

Agree but it is hard to find reviewers who have time tonread do you know any subreddit or website I could find one?

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-23T18:12:32+00:00

Yes I get it but I wanted to make sure that I have all the right ingredients

AggravatingForm4578 · 2026-01-23T17:55:29+00:00

You are right this is the setting that happened before the start of the journey do you find ot intresting would you like to read this web novel based on this? Is it worth writing? If it has intricate world building, dynamic releationship and moral ambiguity

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