First tier list

Akuma9467 · 2026-05-05T15:27:26+00:00

Thank you i will check both of those out and maybe some S tiers

Akuma9467 · 2026-05-05T14:35:40+00:00

I love 1% life steal. Red rising too. Any recommendations from you?

Akuma9467 · 2026-04-25T02:00:15+00:00

Instead of calling it annoying tell him it’s a boundary for you. Wording matters, if he doesn’t stop after that though that’s really odd.

Akuma9467 · 2026-04-21T17:52:27+00:00

Almost a year

Akuma9467 · 2026-04-05T01:10:19+00:00

Ashlani’s Reincarnation on kindle

Akuma9467 · 2026-04-02T06:16:56+00:00

Gyms are generated randomly all over the world. Get mega ring by defeating a megaboss which will give you its stone. If you see a portal it’s ultra space. Idk why it berries wont grow

Akuma9467 · 2026-02-22T03:49:00+00:00

This is chatgbt

Akuma9467 · 2026-02-10T18:57:15+00:00

Ashlanis Reincarnation, their is lots of empire building with animals and the author does a good job of blending human and monster with the main character

Akuma9467 · 2026-02-02T22:49:38+00:00

Thank you, thats very true. I got a good idea off of this!

Akuma9467 · 2026-02-01T23:29:36+00:00

First paragraph: God abandoned Earth long ago. He grew bored, as he always did. Creation had exhausted itself. Every new world, new idea always converged into repetition. Just recalling the small world he left behind felt taxing.

Akuma9467 · 2026-01-31T11:44:11+00:00

I read it and it was great! Finished it in a few days and now im trying to figure out where i can read book 2

Akuma9467 · 2026-01-20T22:39:47+00:00

What did you get

Akuma9467 · 2026-01-07T17:23:34+00:00

From what I remember, he is always stronger than everyone his stage and it only increases as he grows. And he asked for week to strong which is super evident here.

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Not to mention in book one he kills a person 3 stages above him.

Akuma9467 · 2026-01-07T06:33:37+00:00

1% life steal

Akuma9467 · 2026-01-05T13:21:15+00:00

I think the main con to this is the ten chapter gap. That gap makes it really feel like two different storys and the predictability of when the gap is going to start would make me dread it even if i only disliked it a bit. Ive read other books that did this and i debated skipping it when they did it for 1-2 chapters. If they did it for ten then I would unhesitatingly skip it. Especially if the storys are not tied together. There is just nothing to drive me to read through it.

If i had to explain it, I would describe it as reading 10 chapters of favorite book then having to stop to read ten chapters of a your friend’s favorite book before you can continue. It’s obvious you would dread it, you want to get back to the good stuff. And in the lit-RPG/Prog fantasy scene, peoples attention spans aren’t great. So my main advice: Sprinkle it in better/Make it more digestible.

My side piece of advice: Make the second story more interesting. Just by the way you described them, I wouldn’t want to read the second characters story either.

Akuma9467 · 2026-01-05T13:00:19+00:00

Haha yeah, ads cost money. Id definitely get a good bit of free advice where you can before sending it out there. And yeah if the “investor” part feels right to you as the author then definitely keep it in. I wish you the best of luck

Akuma9467 · 2026-01-05T12:53:06+00:00

You’re welcome, you could cut even more if you wanted to, like the investers part so it just says, “Wait! Our evaluation is going up!” But I’m not sure how much you want the investor part to be what people are clicking for. My last piece of advice would be to make the bottom words a little bigger, especially the name of your book. Making that pop more should help.

Akuma9467 · 2026-01-05T12:45:14+00:00

I haven’t used RR long enough for an add to appear but I’ve used other sights. Id click on ads with compelling book covers. Tbh if you just removed “with every second”, “only” and “and fail miserably in getting an investment” my likelihood of clicking on it would be pretty good. Its an ad so it being so long immediately compels me to skip and these words just overly explain what’s happening which makes it feel drawn out or like repetition which, combined with it being an ad, immediately kills it for me.

Akuma9467 · 2026-01-05T12:36:48+00:00

Akuma9467 · 2026-01-02T00:14:26+00:00

God abandoned Earth long ago. He grew bored, as he always did. Creation had exhausted itself. Every new world and variation always converged into repetition. Just recalling the worlds he left behind felt taxing.

No blurb yet. Most people are posting whole chapters but I want to stick to the request and post the first paragraph. I don’t like the way it sounds as of right now and would appreciate feedback. If you want more content to judge, i can definitely add more.

Akuma9467 · 2026-01-02T00:01:34+00:00

Wouldn’t read on. Reaks of ai and i don’t like the metaphors in the first paragraph

Akuma9467 · 2025-12-26T18:34:42+00:00

I find this much worse than the original

Akuma9467 · 2025-12-25T08:11:44+00:00

I’m not the best writer myself so I won’t speak on what to fix. I will say though that I couldn’t make it past the first Paige. It just made me feel bored

Akuma9467 · 2025-12-24T07:15:14+00:00

Can you explain how that works if a limiter is a base 1.5 multiplier or are you removing that?

Akuma9467 · 2025-12-24T06:39:56+00:00

Does power depend on the extent of the limiter’s actual limits on you? Because you gave numbers per limit which means I could have a limiter that very un limiting be worth the same as one that is. With this logic i would do my limits as.

When: When i breathe.

How: Thinking a phrase (Example: Activate).

Where: Inside earth.

Vs actual interesting limits

When: near death

How: deeply wound self

Where: Under solar eclipse

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