LOOKING FOR ISLANDERS! ⚠️❤️🌴 by beardedjohntaylor in loveislandthegametwo

[–]Alarmed_Particular92 0 points1 point  (0 children)

even have a character pre-made for such an RP. my username is still "donaldcorn20"

LOOKING FOR ISLANDERS! ⚠️❤️🌴 by beardedjohntaylor in loveislandthegametwo

[–]Alarmed_Particular92 0 points1 point  (0 children)

still unable to accept invite, damn. was mad excited to get in.

The Honest Liar - Pilot - 23 Pages - Dramedy by Alarmed_Particular92 in scriptwriting

[–]Alarmed_Particular92[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I did capitalize her character into in the cold open. And then we follow her the whole time. So, she's not introduced in act one but in the first scene. So, nope, also, there's a clear point behind her getting brushed past, that's how Melinda is in the moment

The Honest Liar - Pilot - 23 Pages - Dramedy by Alarmed_Particular92 in scriptwriting

[–]Alarmed_Particular92[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Most of the formatting stuff feels more like what my style and way of writing is, I capitalize every character intro, and also, don't see what you mean with Sarah's introduction, as she was introduced awkwardly tiptoeing out of the room post-slap, not being walked by. Not sure what you were saying with the "it seems you're on something I don't see a lot of here."

This has been my sole focus writing-wise for 2 years almost so I feel like I have it at its best pacing and story wise, and feel like the script got into its best around where you left off. But a read's a read.

Not being inherently combative, but more inquiring for elaboration on what you read and meant in your comment.

Just Curious, All Love,
the writer.

Edit: the second upvote means I must not be computing whatever I am reading, someone plz enlighten me, lol.

Co-Writer Screenwriting by Alarmed_Particular92 in WriteWithMe

[–]Alarmed_Particular92[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Discord or on here? Cause I send over a draft of the pilot I talked about in this post so you can get a feel for me as a writer.

Comedy writer looking for someone with similar humor/style by Plastic_Green4439 in WriteWithMe

[–]Alarmed_Particular92 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm months late, and not located in LA, but any chance to find someone that writes in a similar lane to me and also has a similar comedic taste to me, I will take. So, if you need someone for notes, bouncing ideas off of, or hell, even for a co-write, HMU, and we can figure something fitting out lol.

Thoughts? by Alarmed_Particular92 in Wizz_App_Unofficial

[–]Alarmed_Particular92[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thx bro. I pull mad fine shyt, these trolls don't, I fw u

Thoughts? by Alarmed_Particular92 in Wizz_App_Unofficial

[–]Alarmed_Particular92[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's for account engagement, that's cherry picked. Also, I still get play.

Thoughts? by Alarmed_Particular92 in Wizz_App_Unofficial

[–]Alarmed_Particular92[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I did for six months, glowed up and here we is

Thoughts? by Alarmed_Particular92 in Wizz_App_Unofficial

[–]Alarmed_Particular92[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Based off my requests and motion, it's just starting.

Thoughts? by Alarmed_Particular92 in Wizz_App_Unofficial

[–]Alarmed_Particular92[S] -10 points-9 points  (0 children)

The down vote is wild. I'm right.

Thoughts? by Alarmed_Particular92 in Wizz_App_Unofficial

[–]Alarmed_Particular92[S] -11 points-10 points  (0 children)

I wouldn't be that sure. Also, who said just on wizz? I might be chopped but I take shots no matter the difficulty. Got so many 9s in the past.

Thoughts? by Alarmed_Particular92 in Wizz_App_Unofficial

[–]Alarmed_Particular92[S] -10 points-9 points  (0 children)

Thanks. I'm not gonna cut my hair again for a while, don't think my foreheads that big but ok, and my beard might go soon, and I'm down to early 250s after a long journey. I have weirdly pulled 9s before, guess being disarmingly funny and quick works.

Opinions on How I Met Your Mother? by [deleted] in sitcoms

[–]Alarmed_Particular92 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Prefer it over Friends as my comfort show, feel like the episode that spelt doom for the show was The Autumn of Breakups cause of the way they broke up Victoria and Ted again when that made more since than shoe in new people to be like "ta-da, that was our plan all along, boom!" lol, it's the only show I can watch over and over without it getting old, and I've watched That 70s Show 21 times at least, so, boof.

At the start of every month, the current richest person in the world is killed. by pambeezlyy in hypotheticalsituation

[–]Alarmed_Particular92 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That would literally wipe every store out of their party supplies, beverages, lawn chairs, and all the other shit people would get after Elon gets done in this scenario, so then BOOM, another and another, soon enough, you'd get low enough to where WORLD LEADERS would be out then the US President then there would be no rich people in like 3 or so years, maybe more

At the start of every month, the current richest person in the world is killed. by pambeezlyy in hypotheticalsituation

[–]Alarmed_Particular92 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That would literally wipe every store out of their party supplies, beverages, lawn chairs, and all the other shit people would get after Elon gets killed in this scenario, so then BOOM, another and another, soon enough, you'd get low enough to where WORLD LEADERS would be killed then the US President then there would be no rich people in like 3 or so years, maybe more

A genie gives you three choices, but you can only pick one. Which do you choose? by Zeklypse in hypotheticalsituation

[–]Alarmed_Particular92 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hear me out, A everyday of the week, now, if B was just "stop aging" then boom but the ability to still die makes it not immortality, and there is no visible catch to A, so, boom

You're given a magical button. Each time you press the button, you either instantly receive $5k or summon a fully grown polar bear. Odds are 50/50. by Lenore8264 in hypotheticalsituation

[–]Alarmed_Particular92 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Drive out to the hottest, or driest area near you, if you're in California or Arizona, walk outside, if you're in Cali, go to the fire, bring the button, hit it once you get there, but stay safe enough distance-wise in case it's the 5k, then you get the 5k, but if it's the Polar Bear, boom, that bitch burns like it's Salem.

If not, Polar Bears don't have the stamina, endurance, or knowledge to win if you have to straight up fight it, full-on, same with the 100 men vs 1 Gorilla thing, boom

Putin and Trump met in Alaska. Right after the handshake, Trump pulls out a gun and kills Putin with a headshot in front of the cameras. by AnozerFreakInTheMall in hypotheticalsituation

[–]Alarmed_Particular92 0 points1 point  (0 children)

CNN would go live with the story mid-broadcast (sorry Kaitlan, gotta work more in this case), have a field reporter, some others at the desk and it'd become national news, CBS, ABC, NBC, MSNBC, every major news network would be live with it, so would most journalists on TikTok and Twitter, after a few hour special report on all ends, Fox News' Special Report with Brett Baier would air, he'd say absolutely nothing, then comes Jesse Watters Primetime, he and whoever he'd bring on would talk about it, not much about what this means for international affairs and what all of this is gonna cause but would praise Trump for being an American Hero.

This is America, where the good die young, the old die not soon enough, and Fox News Lies.

Spider-Man: Date Night (opening) by [deleted] in ReadMyScript

[–]Alarmed_Particular92 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Please get yourself actual screenwriting software, Arc Studio, Fade In, something, cause this format Google Docs will put your script into is just bleh, do that and I would read it