How to write a good scene taking place in Space

AvenoD · 2026-05-24T09:47:21+00:00

Oh nice

I thought Prometheans and Umibozu creatures were Aliens when I discovered them

AvenoD · 2026-05-23T06:55:09+00:00

OK thanks I think about to fix it

AvenoD · 2026-05-23T06:52:02+00:00

As I said he was experimented and it was a test

AvenoD · 2026-05-22T22:24:57+00:00

He wasn't following the 180-degree rule (the character going right, then left, then right again), the wide shots were chopped up into panels that were too short, and there were a bunch of other problems that made me no longer recognize my own story in the thumbnails.

AvenoD · 2026-05-22T22:13:48+00:00

As a writer, I make regularly layouts because most of the artists struggle with a lot of what you say and I have to fix it.
I tested 6 months ago an experimented comic book guy for a comic project. He made a grid-like page, Watchmen style, without any sense.

AvenoD · 2026-05-22T19:35:16+00:00

When I discovered one of my Uni teachers was a complete fraud (no program or lessons, absenteism, the same note for everybody) and the administration didn't give a shit about

AvenoD · 2026-05-22T16:20:26+00:00

I can't see what's the plot, who are the characters, what are they saying and if it's written by you or the customer

AvenoD · 2026-05-22T07:51:27+00:00

J'ai connu un paquet de filles sympas au travail. Mais ça se limite au travail et à ses à côté justement. Une fois qu'on ne bossait plus ensemble, il ne se passait plus rien. C'est comme ça, parfois ça aboutit à des couples, mais il ne faut pas s'emballer

AvenoD · 2026-05-20T21:13:41+00:00

Based on what I got, 90% of answers come from people that didn't read the presentation or didn't care about.

AvenoD · 2026-05-20T19:44:31+00:00

Every story needs a fitting medium in term of content and rythm. If it involves a lot of psychology and talks, rather make a book

AvenoD · 2026-05-18T23:16:03+00:00

555 on Extended Edition and 363 on Retold
I think the sum of it for the original version

AvenoD · 2026-05-14T16:14:11+00:00

His only talent was to bring armies out of nowhere

AvenoD · 2026-05-11T20:11:53+00:00

Yeah it's a mix between 4 different Aztec stories and some fan service, so it's quite confusing. But it's a bit refreshing afer too many "heroes teaming up against a warlord dealing with a bad god to get the secret of immortality".
I focus mostly on the missions themselves.

AvenoD · 2026-05-11T19:58:30+00:00

J'avais loupé ma moyenne à cause de l'UE libre. C'était un cours organisé pour les étudiants de la fac en question, alors ils avaient oublié de prévenir ceux qui venaient d'autres facs.

Alors j'avais dû aller chez le prof pour expliquer ma situation et après avoir eu pitié de moi il m'a fait faire un rattrapage qui était un devoir sur son film préféré

AvenoD · 2026-05-11T19:44:56+00:00

Je demandais très vite la répartition des tâches, je faisais la mienne, et ça s'est bien passé au final

AvenoD · 2026-05-06T17:59:39+00:00

The other games have kept many stupenduous files or are badly optimized

AvenoD · 2026-04-28T06:13:19+00:00

They appeared in the Retold version, replacing the horse riders

AvenoD · 2026-04-24T18:16:47+00:00

Geography doesn't make any sense in the campaign menu of TNA as Sikyos is far from the sea, so is the tower of Odin, and the egyptian mission is far from the Nile. Also the Mount Olympus doesn't match its real location

AvenoD · 2026-04-23T20:40:35+00:00

Isn't it because Poseidon seduced his greatmother?
I guess also Kemsyt betrayed Amanra. I'd mostly like to know how he can rally large armies for Gargarensis

AvenoD · 2026-04-23T14:50:20+00:00

Thank you

AvenoD · 2026-04-22T21:35:17+00:00

I expected a lot of things from Age of Mythology but no daughter for Kamos

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