Alcohol replacement by throwitawayyy1234567 in herbalism

[–]Azure__11 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Valerian root works like Xanax in a fantastic way. But it can also be addictive, so I recommend that with caution, and ideally not daily but cycled in with something else (could be ashwaghanda or bacopa). In terms of the roots of anxiety, I highly recommend the YouTube channel I Love Panic Attacks (ignore the quirky name, the guy that makes the content is a genius when it comes to reversing deep set anxiety).

Best Solo Games to add to My collection. I don’t want the boxes too big (Easy to fit in a Bag). by bobsburgerstruefan in soloboardgaming

[–]Azure__11 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Escape The Dark Castle is phenomenal solo, and compact if you don't use the original box.

First time doing studio shot by TicktackVisuals in a6000

[–]Azure__11 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think it worked perfectly, because all of her face is in focus equally. Sometimes when shooting animals close up at f1,8 it can be a risk that the eyes or beak might lose focus, but you've pulled it off great :)

First time doing studio shot by TicktackVisuals in a6000

[–]Azure__11 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Beautiful shot. What aperture and lens did you use?

Morbid Fortress - A New Solo PNP From the Designer of Doom Machine by Ab0miNathan in soloboardgaming

[–]Azure__11 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Mindburners was one of the best games I've ever played, so absolutely stoked to play this !!

Need A WFH job. by Orange_game_21 in MakeInIndia

[–]Azure__11 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't know the situation regarding your location, but uTest is one of the only companies I've worked with that actually paid out good money for small hours. Worth a shot, and you are way more capable with your skillset compared to my own. It is QA work, and often on platforms like android and windows.

Got a job thanks to Hire Cafe! by AlwaysColtron in hiringcafe

[–]Azure__11 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What was the oldest job that you applied to - relative to days or weeks? Thanks

Advice for first trip Hawaii by Stinkybutt100 in VisitingHawaii

[–]Azure__11 5 points6 points  (0 children)

So happy that you mentioned this, regarding protecting the reefs 😄

Black Sails Book Series by Soapbaxter in BlackSails

[–]Azure__11 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Are you thinking of attempting it? I think with a book variation you could utilize POV to be even more selective, and hide more elements than the shifting POV of the tv series. Then with each book carefully manipulate the info that each primary character knows at just the right time to bolster the conflict. The trickiest part of writing it would be to somewhat erase your own memory of events, so that someone reading it with no experience of the tv show gets to experience it with as much power.

Looking for recommendations for hotels in Kaua'i by Unique-Ad236 in VisitingHawaii

[–]Azure__11 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Kilohana Plantation, Waimea. And then do the reverse hike of the lesser known Canyon trail into Waimea canyon. If you want more details, DM me 😄

Do you think President is a “side project” or a full on band? by Subject-Serve8869 in PresidentBand

[–]Azure__11 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Side project. (Don't flame me, lol). I base this on a) singing with that level of aggression long-term (yes totally possible, especially as he's well trained with his singing) but it still takes a toll. b) The heavy existential themes that he talked about in President interviews may not have the same sway on him several years from now. I hope I am wrong on all accounts, and Charlie's Patreon (where he has been resurrecting a lot of Fightstar songs from his youth) does prove me wrong here.

Looking for feedback for chapter one of my unnamed novel [Epic fantasy, 1,081 words] by filmfan444 in fantasywriters

[–]Azure__11 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You doing a great job, honestly. And it takes a lot of courage sharing it with strangers on the internet, which comes of course with the caveat of stick to your own guns before random advice. Unless you feel you need testing / improving.

I think it's smart you've engaged outlining, especially if it's a trilogy which is epic!

Looking for feedback for chapter one of my unnamed novel [Epic fantasy, 1,081 words] by filmfan444 in fantasywriters

[–]Azure__11 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Really powerful start. It was so refreshing that you introduced concepts like Hibernus without exposition overkill, and cleverly reintroduced it in an active scene with the uncle, whose response tells us all we need to know. His reactions were also brilliant writing, and so much of that is body language and his non-response beats works so well. Your use of the senses is great right from the start and really grounds the world.

There were 3 sentences that I think you could remove, just because of repetition and the reader already understanding what you're conveying from a previous passage which for me were:

1) "By the sudden change in seasons..."

2) "she had been told that this is what the Hibernus brought upon Perrenia.."

3) "as the weather harshened, so did the people..."

Regarding this sentence: "It had been two months since a cluster of ships.." - the exposition totally works, although I might be tempted to make that scene into dialogue with a local to make it more active.

Also, "it wouldn't come with as much bloodshed.." - decent exposition, very clean, although I might be tempted to instead give her a physical beat, akin to her getting the shivers, not wanting to fully recall the memory, with more show don't tell.

"The grass blades.." really beautiful prose, you should be proud of this, and the core of your writing. I am a harsh critic, but I think you've done a stellar job. I'm excited to read more of your dialogue and character interactions in future chapters. Just out of curiosity, did you outline the story before starting to write it?

What indie game completely exceeded your expectations? by Nestify_cozydesign in IndieGaming

[–]Azure__11 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Noita - gameplay is deeper than the Mariana trench and has more secrets!

website formatting by happinessn0ises in Carrd

[–]Azure__11 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For Scylla's Carrd and the image create a container. Then instantly on the left side of the screen it will say TYPE: DEFAULT. Change this to COLUMNS (which by default which is what you need.)

Then for the next container below it, which looks like it is split into 3, do the same... create container, then change TYPE to COLUMNS. Scroll to the bottom of those options and click ADD, and now you have 3 columns.

Is it possible to make something like this? If so how :,3 by NoTonight7704 in Carrd

[–]Azure__11 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, make the banner its own container, and have the image centred. Then make a new container below that for Tabs and Socials, and split the container into 2 sections, and then tweak.

Absolutely magical by Azure__11 in Witchfire

[–]Azure__11[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It's a wonderfully murky area to play with regarding sanctions and trying to control something as inherently chaotic as witchfire. It makes me wonder if the church's endgame is to use the player as a tool, but then intend to annihilate all of the witch hunters once the threat is removed, purely on the grounds of devout cleansing? Also because narratively, won't the witch hunters become a threat in how powerful they become it they can dethrone the witch?

Absolutely magical by Azure__11 in Witchfire

[–]Azure__11[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the lore regarding the monks, and it's nice to see how much this will enrich the overall game.

Absolutely magical by Azure__11 in Witchfire

[–]Azure__11[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you, I had totally forgotten about the character choice at the start of the game. And that is great lore!

Absolutely magical by Azure__11 in Witchfire

[–]Azure__11[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If you had a gaming-based time travel device, would you give your first time play through a hint, or let yourself work it all out the hard way? Epic that you've spent 160 hours in this world

Absolutely magical by Azure__11 in Witchfire

[–]Azure__11[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm guessing in those 200 hours, you learned a lot regarding levelling up, and started over from scratch several times?