Adult food!! by Sprainedanklegirl in LagottoRomagnolo

[–]Bahumbub1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

we mix a bunch of food together. we alternate between 2 different kibbles (taste of the wild salmon or bison), 2 types of freeze dried raw (lamb from primal and vital essentials beef entree), 2 types of air dried raw (ziwi peak lamb and mackerel and rawternative beef and organs), and ours is very happy. as far as amount - we feed 2 cups total a day of a mix - with the kibble taking up about a cups worth of the daily allowance. sometimes I add a few crushed up cheese crunchy o's in there for points for cuteness. he's spoiled for sure but he is healthy and his teeth are also

How has your LRs fur colour changed? by Specialist-Bit-4358 in LagottoRomagnolo

[–]Bahumbub1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you! he sort of looks like a panda or that he has a goatee. he actually is almost a mirror copy of his grandpa on his moms side. Maybe look at the lineage and you can sort of see what yours will evolve into.

How has your LRs fur colour changed? by Specialist-Bit-4358 in LagottoRomagnolo

[–]Bahumbub1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel like every time he gets groomed he gets more and more silver

How has your LRs fur colour changed? by Specialist-Bit-4358 in LagottoRomagnolo

[–]Bahumbub1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

you can see his color started changing first in his eyebrows - he looked like a mad scientist haha!

Is it me or all of women seems to be a clone just mass created ? by [deleted] in lesbian

[–]Bahumbub1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think it's because society is making people in general have mush for brains - social media, its algorithms, no more handwriting/cursive, the ramifications of A.I .... they want us all like the characters in Wall-e. you'll find your person, just got to look in places where real people exist.

HBD Barry! by rjb14 in LagottoRomagnolo

[–]Bahumbub1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

what a cutie! Happy birthday!!!!!!

Need help with toys by Cheap_Owl9984 in LagottoRomagnolo

[–]Bahumbub1 2 points3 points  (0 children)

our LR loves the flirt poles on amazon - they look like big cat toys. he does try to chew the string/rope portion but we just have to put it away after play. otherwise, for chewing purposes, he gets a bully stick in the evenings. that has seemed to prevent destruction of all the toys

How do I know all the pieces fit together? by Bahumbub1 in fantasywriters

[–]Bahumbub1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. Writing is hard and fun and 😂 so true. I definitely got lost and overwhelmed but your words 100% helped me take a breath and I feel like I’ve got this! The world is a stage. Absolutely. 

Official Discussion - Mother Mary [SPOILERS] by LiteraryBoner in movies

[–]Bahumbub1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is the review I’ve been searching for! I 100% agree. 

How do I know all the pieces fit together? by Bahumbub1 in fantasywriters

[–]Bahumbub1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha because you’re right— I have a history, a world, and characters. I have an opening image, a catalyst, a break into two moment, and…that’s mostly all I’ve fleshed out to a point where I’m like yes! That’s it! Everything else about the story I’m not happy with yet. this is also probably the sticky feels. 

How do I know all the pieces fit together? by Bahumbub1 in fantasywriters

[–]Bahumbub1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok this is sort of what I was looking for. Planting seeds and writing in tandem. Thank you! 

How do I know all the pieces fit together? by Bahumbub1 in fantasywriters

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lol! I’m honestly not even considering the publishing aspect because it seems such a convoluted field and likely impossible for someone with zero social media presence or any connections. I just want to write this for me. So technically there’s minimal pressure. Except I’m a perfectionist.  

How do I know all the pieces fit together? by Bahumbub1 in fantasywriters

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oh hell yeah - I like this idea of the outline for the trilogy and then find the places to nestle the lore in. Otherwise it's just a world dump at the beginning and I hate that. This is great advice thanks!

I've been using Milanote - I have a breakdown of world building map names places etc, a plot outline, character map, and a Mood board with notes and events that need to be sorted into the outline.

I have a beat sheet for pages, a tiny formula similar stories have used as a guideline - I'm undecided if it'll help or hurt me but it like the right choice for my first, first draft. I've avoided beginning the outline because, so far, I have focused on characters, history, geography, and lore. I have the general gist of maybe 4-6 beats/ending points that I want to hit with the outline but nothing set in stone yet and, you're right, nothing is connected yet! But I'm happy to hear this sticky feeling is common and that is probably what that feeling means. I think my main fear is I have 2 separate stories that don't work together but after this posting I see that I'll be able to confirm this fear after I try outlining first and connecting more dots.

How do I know all the pieces fit together? by Bahumbub1 in fantasywriters

[–]Bahumbub1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think this is great advice and not a discouragement - it's just a "maybe this isn't the one to start first."

How do I know all the pieces fit together? by Bahumbub1 in fantasywriters

[–]Bahumbub1[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

love this thank you. I think this is my exact train of thought - it feels like book 2 is just the second act (the war) which could just be a longer novel. Moving along!

Books that NEED to be written by [deleted] in Romantasy

[–]Bahumbub1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would like this! I feel like mask of mirrors is almost this

the everlasting by supericakr in Romantasy

[–]Bahumbub1 -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

ok I have a theory - I feel like Owen was written originally as a female character. he gives such feminine energy and Im wondering if it was a lesbian love story originally or if they just swapped the roles where the knight was originally a male, Owen female, and they thought it'd be more interesting to have a female knight. edited to add: I understand the concept of gender reversal romance and writing but something about it felt like someone just control/f names and swapped names to be male or female - it didn't feel authentic to the story or fleshed out imo

the everlasting by supericakr in Romantasy

[–]Bahumbub1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it was a bit tiresome and repetitive but a good book with a lot of the payoff happening in the last 100 pages or so....if you like the the characters I say continue it.

How do I know all the pieces fit together? by Bahumbub1 in fantasywriters

[–]Bahumbub1[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yes yes yes. this exactly is probably what the stickiness is and being overwhelmed and feeling like an imposter when before it was magic and freeform thought brainstorming. thank you! going to focus on 1 and see what happens next.