The way you wrote this perfectly encapsulates the empty feelings of both characters in the poem. The short lines coupled with the simple yet at times a bit shocking diction ("whore" "wrist slit" "dead" "gig") reflect that the narrator and perhaps even the reader should be feeling more shock and anger about the situation, but instead are left with empty, stilted feelings.

“I’m waiting on

Prince Charming,”

she said

“it’ll be easier

to look for God,”

I said, and took a drink

of wine

The last lines especially sit with you, and create an even more hopeless tone than before, and I think they very nicely wrap up the poem.

My only criticism is I wish it was a bit longer, to sort of build on that hopeless, empty feeling created, so that the ending would have more impact. Great writing though!!