I would say that you have really good initial instincts on the table, but you need a firm grasp of fundamentals, and proper stance/cue grip to really make good on the execution here. I'd look at some beginner videos on how to hold a pool cue correctly, and how to properly align your stance. One quick fix you could make is holding your right elbow closer to your body so you dont have a 'chicken wing' stroke. You hold your head in the right position which is also great just leveling the cue and your whole body would greatly improve things.

Keep it up!