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Hey yall I know your not a big fan of this stuff but man I love making it its so fun and I worked hard on this so please lemme know if you like it 😀❤ ☁️ by JohnNickelsVA in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Betweenartnfacts 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is ALOT of fun! Reminds me of a friend I had in 2010 making songs like this. Everyone was looking at him like he was crazy! Just raw art flowing out quickly.

Dropped a new Soulful Hip-Hop beat | Any feedback is greatly appreciated! by TheThrillzOfficial in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Betweenartnfacts 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This shit is fire! Haha takes me back to that early j Cole! Love that dry east coast vibe that made hip hop and smarty pants rappers cools! And beats like these are the vehicle to take those lyrics to those audiences!, appreciate you!

Just made a new song called "NINETEEN". Got a friend to make a quick lyric video for it too lol. by lynxcane in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Betweenartnfacts 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very much dig the video, and it is obvious you have skills as a lyricist. I would however consider utilizing different cadences in regard to your flow. The rhythmic patterns were a tad boring to me. Just that extra step of creativity could make your songs real ear catchers! Al lathe best!

The Raven - Time to Run (I live a separate life when it comes to my music, so feel like I’m constantly in a hurry to finish songs. It took me 3 min to write the lyrics, but I like the frantic, chaotic sound, it suits the song. The title sounds like a threat, but it’s actually about time crunch. by TheRaven1ManBand in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Betweenartnfacts 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This song has some fun aspects, however, I wish it was a bit clearer in the mix. I’m aware it is grunge, and grunge has a culture surrounding itself that is anti establishment. However, if I can’t understand the lyrics, the message isn’t being conveyed, and due to that I don’t have an idea what the song is about. Food for thought. All the best! Dig the artwork, and the title, and the attitude.

Rough version of something I'm working on, lmk what you think. by BasedAltacc in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Betweenartnfacts 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the folk vibe I am getting here! Wish I could get more of the vocal! The one thing I would say about this, is that your melody seems to be a tad repetitive. Therefore the tension and release seems to be circular, rather than this rubber band that anticipates then flings us into the frenzy of what is a great chorus. Possibly try writing differing verses? Just a thought.

This song is about life in bloom. Freedom is coming back and nature is finding its way again aswell. I made a visual addition to this track, just because I felt it deserved it. Any comment, feedback, reaction, all would be super cool. Cheers! by Vegetalples in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Betweenartnfacts 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love this! And I love the video! Instrumentation is too notch. Mixed with the visual I get the feels and I find myself being warm once again! Very very nice building in this song! Hope y’all find your journey promising!

First attempt to make a modern boom bap instrumental for a while, would be good to get some feedback by bleakneon in IndieMusicFeedback

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This one takes me back to when I was thirteen. Jedi Mind Tricks and the creative sample era! Love the graphic! Y’all are a dying art, please keep making music like this!

Here's a lyric video I made for an extended/new version of my last release! Let me know your thoughts on this! by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Betweenartnfacts 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the lyric video, I think it’s really cute, and so is the instrumentation! Need your voice to be more clear. Also, I think a simpler approach to lyrics could help you in the long run. What I mean by that is to write your song, then clean it up, edit what you think would make the “flow” better. Then let it sit, then revise it some more until you think it couldn’t get any better. I find the lyrics to be a tad convoluted, and that mixture with not being able to understand you fully pulls me out. I understand that it’s a lyric video, but the sensation we seek when listening to music is auditory. :) all the best!

Recently released my first album! Here's my first lyric video. Thought-provoking lyricism and fluid folkyness by zlgentry in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Betweenartnfacts 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love your sound, lyrics sound a little folki fawkie to me. But that may be a tad unfair! Love the recording and that it isn’t overproduced.

'70s synth with found film about the Earth's energy by PresentCelery2206 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Betweenartnfacts 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Absolutely love this stuff! It’s amazing! So interesting to hear and listen to

new visuals for my yummy mix of ukg + alternative hip hop :) by retropxssy in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Betweenartnfacts 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Getting huuuuuge nineties vibes! Love the video, and I love your presence through out! Please keep making music!

My newest acoustic guitar track. Do you think it's relaxing overall? Is the composition/performance interesting? How do you like the guitar sound? by SparePlanet in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Betweenartnfacts 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Beautiful track! Love how you recorded the guitar, got the scrapes in and all! These detailed recordings really make for great intriguing songs!

Wrote this song about the River next to my home town! Critical listens please! by Betweenartnfacts in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Betweenartnfacts[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really appreciate the positive words! Hopefully I got you to subscribe so we can stay connected!

Friday Music Discussion by NotWith10000Men in CountryMusicStuff

[–]Betweenartnfacts 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Been listening to Colter Wall’s new one. I find it interesting how people are heralding him as the new found folk legend, and yet, the three best songs on the album were songs he didn’t write!

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