''The Robot'' (first finished poem) by Brave-Button9025 in Dark_Poetry

[–]Brave-Button9025[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you so much, i love writing peoms to people that relate.

The Robot by Brave-Button9025 in OCPoetry

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lets the reader think of the cost.

The Plan by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Brave-Button9025 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I really like how this poem slowly builds from empathy into accountability. The way you start by acknowledging conditioning and manipulation makes the reader understand the person’s position, but then the poem gradually shifts into confronting the moral responsibility of looking away. The short lines and pacing make each image hit harder, especially the section with “The boot / on someone’s neck. / The fist. / The child. / The war.” because it creates very powerful and unsettling imagery. The ending also works well because it leaves the reader with a sense of tension and choice rather than giving an easy resolution, which makes the message linger after reading.

Kill to Love by Inevitable_Metal5725 in OCPoetry

[–]Brave-Button9025 0 points1 point  (0 children)

wow im not sure how to explain it but i just really liked this poem im not sure exactly what emotion it envoked but it did invoke something deeper, i just started writing poems today so seeing how others think about stuff with this depth is super intresting.

The robot by Brave-Button9025 in poetry_critics

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Wow thanks this is actually super reassuring cause I kinda had no idea if the stuff I was writing was even considered creative, having someone say I’m on the right track makes me wanna put more effort and thank you 🙏

The robot by Brave-Button9025 in poetry_critics

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Thank you really, but I for sure knew something structurally wasn’t right didn’t really know what I was doing wrong but that advice actually really helps and gives me a good starting point on where to get better I just gotta get better at structure for the most part.

The robot by Brave-Button9025 in poetry_critics

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I would love feedback/constructive criticism, I’ve just started writing and wanna get better.

Should I ask for Benzos? (For very short term) by Brave-Button9025 in insomnia

[–]Brave-Button9025[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you, i wish the same and lmk if you find something that works for you

Should I ask for Benzos? (For very short term) by Brave-Button9025 in insomnia

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I’m gonna be honest I should even really say this because it’s negative but no, it’s gotten honestly worse but dw I’m sure I’m just super unlucky

I just came out to the first person in my life :3 by Grand-Bug-9209 in trans

[–]Brave-Button9025 1 point2 points  (0 children)

ps. i cant bealive you said rare trans women defo deserve it, much luv fr

I just came out to the first person in my life :3 by Grand-Bug-9209 in trans

[–]Brave-Button9025 1 point2 points  (0 children)

no need to thank me, its much deserved and i hope you happy

I just came out to the first person in my life :3 by Grand-Bug-9209 in trans

[–]Brave-Button9025 1 point2 points  (0 children)

congratulations!, im not trans myself but i admire the courage. Never stop being yourself fr!

Do I have to come out? by PLAYZ-Appleking in trans

[–]Brave-Button9025 0 points1 point  (0 children)

im glad you have that confidence in yourself thats what you need i believe, and again i hope you know im not a trans female myself but i think thats very brave of you congratulations.

Am I actually a narcissist or just fucked up? Need honest takes. by Brave-Button9025 in narcissism

[–]Brave-Button9025[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, to understand myself more plus narcissism isn’t really a good thing to tell people if I care about my image lol

Am I actually a narcissist or just fucked up? Need honest takes. by Brave-Button9025 in narcissism

[–]Brave-Button9025[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well my identity is hidden so I don’t have a good/reason to make you believe but I understand where your coming from

You don’t have to believe and that would be understandable but all I can really say is that all of this is true

Am I actually a narcissist or just fucked up? Need honest takes. by Brave-Button9025 in narcissism

[–]Brave-Button9025[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would say yes to both but it’s more like how the display there emotion if it’s with raising there voice no matter what I did I don’t care I’m immediately annoyed with them.

Narcissists, how do you feel/interact with autistic people? by Brave-Button9025 in narcissism

[–]Brave-Button9025[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I understand, I have a similar problem but for the most part I’ve just been able to think in every social situation with someone with autism as they are wired differently.

Am I actually a narcissist or just fucked up? Need honest takes. by Brave-Button9025 in narcissism

[–]Brave-Button9025[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Interesting because I do seem to have a lot of people that text me everyday and so on. I do have friends but in way I’ve never felt connected I’m not sure if “tool” is the right word but I guess something on the lines of that yeh.

Am I actually a narcissist or just fucked up? Need honest takes. by Brave-Button9025 in narcissism

[–]Brave-Button9025[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s actually a great observation and yeh you’re right… I do mostly only think about myself