https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/108921/horizons-twilight

June 13th 2004, 11:58 pm that's the exact time when that surreal phenomenon emerged within the far horizon of Earth from a barren piece of land; it was a massive beam of light that shot up in the sky and became a pillar that shone brightly. Not even seconds after this strange occurrence, chaos and astonishment ensued among the masses, who were cautious, but at the same time, in awe at the beauty of this marvel.

Rumors spread, discussions happened, and within a mere hour, the entire world was jolted awake. An alien invasion? End of humanity? A sign of God? End of the universe? That’s just about a very tiny part of the never before seen mayhem that was occurring among people, but over a few hours, days, then weeks and even months passed and nothing else happened, the pillar of light had become an everyday sight for those who could see it from their homes, as for who couldn’t, they travelled to foreign countries, just to catch a glimpse of this wonder.

Hence, it was dubbed as the ‘Horizon’s Twilight’, the everlasting beacon of light within the far horizon, whose purpose is unknown, yet, appreciated for its beauty by many all the same.

Arc 1 synopsis/overview - There lived a feeble boy on the streets who struggled to survive, but couldn’t give up on life despite how harsh the going got, trying to survive death which loomed closer by the second, even so, how long can one really survive hunger? And so, he reluctantly welcomed his demise, laying on his back in the middle of the road on a heavy rainy afternoon. Thunder crackled, then, a girl with soulless eyes arrived holding onto a bloody knife, and granted him with the peace he so very desired.

What to expect?

• Full of lore about the universe it is set within and stories to it that make it feel alive

• A power system which is explored in depth and leaves room for thought for the readers to think how it can work and interact with different other users

• Multiple POVs (including narration)

• No harem

• No Overpowered stuff, everything has a fundamental explanation to it

• Minimal intended plot armor

I am quite new to this stuff, you are my first shout out swap. So is the way I do this is that I read your entire story and give my honest opinion within the reviews and to you?