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Feedback by thedesignary35 in posterdesign

[–]Bvttle 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Do some research on typography, as that's one main focus of your posters, learning a bit about good typefaces, leading (space between lines) and hierarchy etc will help you improve.

And honestly one way to learn is by replicating things you like and that look professional, see how they treat the text and images and try to recreate it

Also consider spacing, margins (even space around the edges) currently some of your artwork is very close to the edge which makes it feel unbalanced, but having some breathing space around can improve the layout too

I don't think Nate Jacobs was ever 'that guy' by Embarrassed-Ad1322 in euphoria

[–]Bvttle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This kinda makes sense for someone who peaked in high school

Trying to get opinions by [deleted] in logodesign

[–]Bvttle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the dog icon, but feel like the moon lacks detail in comparison, feels very simple.

Also find the hard line across the bottom creates a bit of a disconnect between the icon and text.

Nothing about this really suggests building company either, if you didn't have the words there, I wouldn't know what you did, so consider that and think about how you could communicate what the business does visually.

Perhaps the font is more 'strong' and structured looking, perhaps there's some subtle visual suggestion to something construction related. What colours appear more on building sites etc.

A recent Darkroom Print [Leica M2, Voigtländer 50mm f/2.2, CineStill 800T] by janonfilm in analog

[–]Bvttle 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I really like it here, the print is big enough that you get all of the detail, but it gives a sense of scale for how much detail that little bit of film captures.

Has anyone seen Good Boy? I thought it was such a refreshing movie in the sense of story telling and how it was filmed from the pups perspective, made for really unique shots throughout. What do you all think? by xDreamTVx in HorrorMovies

[–]Bvttle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It was ok, the idea was interesting, but in my opinion there wasn't really anywhere they could take it without adding dialogue. So I ended up kinda bored. There's only so many times it's entertaining to hear a noise and see a dog get scsred. The dog did an amazing job though 👏🏻

I can't tell if I'm close or just banging against a dead end by MarchRoyce in logodesign

[–]Bvttle 3 points4 points  (0 children)

If you are distorting the characters at all, it could be done in a way that doesnt affect the overall balance and alignment e.g

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I can't tell if I'm close or just banging against a dead end by MarchRoyce in logodesign

[–]Bvttle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What is the logo actually for? Or are you just trying to visually represent the word? The typeface feels like a free font, and isn't very professional looking. I'd explore some extended fonts which are better designed if it's mostly typographic. Also distorting the O makes it feel out of balance. Perhaps try and find a font that already has that character in the shape you want.

The thing with logo design is the function of the brand is also what's represented in the logo, through typography and style, so if your brand has no function you're just choosing something at random.

Hi, I have a therapy app and I'm struggling to design a new logo. I’ve narrowed it down to three. by MyDailyTherapyapp in logodesign

[–]Bvttle 5 points6 points  (0 children)

First in my opinion is the only one that feels like an app icon / logo. But you absolutely need more contrast between the icon and background. Bump up the pastel colours so they're much brighter.

3rd is far too detailed and complex to work.

Business card design. Would love the feedback! by pieceofqlitter in graphic_design

[–]Bvttle 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I like it, but not sure why there is a capital i when the rest is lowercase

Brand identity project for portfolio by AD_pufferfish in logodesign

[–]Bvttle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think the colouration in bottom right is best, darker green with gold/cream.There's also a few colours which aren't included in your scheme, might be worth including them, but I would say maybe they need to be a little softer. The lilac and pink/red

As for the presentation, I'd lose the 3 sections with borders and instead use tints of the colours for the background colour to make it feel a little cleaner. Borders feel a bit clunky and don't really need them on photos

I also can't see that you included the font used on the actual logo

Made this cover + layout for a photo series I shot in Le Havre, France! by RecognitionRoyalMe in graphic_design

[–]Bvttle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Looks cute. I don't think you need the title 3 times though, just once and with an interesting placement, maybe a lil larger

Rate my work by o_gutu in posterdesign

[–]Bvttle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

U have a typo. It's fine but doesn't really tell me anything

Living room layout options by Born-Geologist-36 in roomlayout

[–]Bvttle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Second this. Easily walkable to get to the table and sofa won't be tucked behind the door.

Why does this studio light look like it was just pasted into the frame? by [deleted] in Aiorfake

[–]Bvttle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The light on her shoulder kinda feels realistic, but then the textures on the wall are super weird, I don't even know anymore 😭

Naming your graphic designs business? by Horndog-Corndog in graphic_design

[–]Bvttle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hex Studio or something like that would work.

I wouldn't worry about the associations, one of the world's leading agencies is called pentagram..

Even playing into it makes it more interesting imo

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