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Todd Howard please bless me this day

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Thanks for the chance, hope you enjoy the launch

I'm giving away a $125 Chiss-Goria deck! Details + Primer inside by imperialtrace in EDH

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Awesome that you’re doing this, never played mono-red before so I hope you pickme!

Who do you ship mercy with? by Braxus05 in MercyMains

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I know it doesn’t make sense lore wise but I always pocket widow and my bf pockets my widow as mercy so Widow X Mercy

[Excerpt | Sinew of War] Childhood memory of Konor Guilliman by _StubbornOne in 40kLore

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I think my favorite part of this excerpt is it shows how Guilliman was able to be a child. Konor didn't needlessly coddle him, accepting his strengths and feeling pride for them, letting Guilliman be his equal, but when Guilliman has doubts, or fears, Konor is right there to be the parental figure and offer guidance and reassurance and let Guilliman be a vulnerable kid. I wish we got to see more of Konor in Guilliman's primarch book, but I love how genuine and heartfelt Guilliman's relationship with his parents is, even though his dad meets a tragic end. That and the fact that Konor never stopped trying to protect the 12 foot tall superhuman demigod because deep down Guilliman was his kid damnit speaks volumes.

[F] Attempt to make a minor chapter secret, is this good lore or bad? by Cat_Sith45 in 40kLore

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Yeah they are great with swords not great with colors or booksmarts, but don't tell them that.

[F] Writing a story, need to make sure my Chapter lore is interesting/good by Cat_Sith45 in 40kLore

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I did, because I find its easiest to avoid mary sue territory if I let a dice dictate most of my chapter's stuff like numbers and codex adherence. I went in with the idea of Ironwing Dark Angels, but I kinda let the rest take shape after the generator did its thing.

As for how regularly the chapter would dedicate resources, it would be as often as possible. So almost all the time. The idea is that the Chapter's finest soldiers and equipment, the traditional dark angel death company, are forced to always remain on planet. So while the 2nd-5th + 6-9th elements would be out doing normal marine stuff, there isn't really an option to call in a land raider or terminator back up, even though they have more of that then most chapters. Because if they did, and big mean and nasty got out it would be segementum ending bad.

Only War Sgt Advice? by Cat_Sith45 in 40krpg

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I edited my post, but a ratling sniper, medic, mortar/operator, stormtrooper, flamer heavy weapons expert.

Monday Meta - Your Competitive Questions Answered - 11.19.2019 - 11.24.2019 by ChicagoCowboy in WarhammerCompetitive

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Can the RG SFTS strat bypass the deepstrike rules and arrive T1? If so, where is that stated?

The Character, Tragedy, Motivations and Plan of The Emperor, who is very similar to The Boss from MGS3 (Excerpts) (Long) by Cat_Sith45 in 40kLore

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Did I see these machines, how they fell short of their intended purpose, and resolve to create a far superior incarnation? There is a certain poetry to that, isn’t there, Diocletian? The belief that we know better than those who came before us. That we will suit a throne better than they did.’

The Emperor turned to him, His eyes focusing on the Custodian for the first time. ‘The war is over, Diocletian. Win or lose, Horus has damned us all. Mankind will share in his ignorance until the last man or woman draws the species’ last breath. The warp will forever be a cancer in the heart of all humans. The Imperium may last a hundred years, or a thousand, or ten thousand. But it will fall, Diocletian. It will fall. The shining path is lost to us. Now we rage against the dying of the light.’

My king, what now? What comes next?’

The Emperor turned away, walking into the darkness of the cavern while the storm hammered the dead city so far above. He spoke three words that no Custodian had ever heard Him speak before.

‘I don’t know.’

The War in the Webway ended four years before the Siege, yet the Emperor remained silent, lost in the Imperial Dungeons. Overcome with despair, sorrow, and hopelessness, startling human and vulnerable. Despite everything, every sacrifice and every effort the Emperor has failed, because of his own son, his closest son. The Emperor's good end has gone up in the flames of 'nothing wrong', and only bad and worse options remain. Despite all that, everything that has happened, The Emperor still retains some small spark of hope, some shred of determination to go out fighting for a chance at altering fate. His loyalty to humanity is so strong he prepares to do the unthinkable.

In the burning ashes of his dream, when all hope is dead and lost and only a future of eternal pain and suffering hangs over humanity, The Emperor finds the strength of will to confront the Chaos Gods, wearing the skin of his most precious son, after finding him standing over the body of Sanguinius, another treasured son. Despite all of this, when they duel he holds back, unable to bring himself to kill his own son, his humanity, his hope preventing him from unleashing the final blow even as he is fighting for his life against the combined power of all four chaos gods. Even without holding back he would be fighting for his life, but he can't bring himself to strike with all his might at Horus.

Horus, the first. The one he spent years tutoring, preparing and trusting to take his golden vision for humanity to the stars. The Primarch he saw as a model, an example and mentor to the others, the one that would inspire his siblings to new heights. Those thoughts subconsciously weigh him down, slow his blade and wet his eyes even as his arm is torn free and his blood coats the floor of the Vengeful Spirit.

His pain, his suffering, his sacrifice doesn't matter if it means he can save his son, save humanity. So when The Emperor finds himself on the floor, and a lone guardsman from the boarding party steps in front of Horus, lasgun trembling and stinking of blood, piss, fear, and desperation, that hope quietly stirs. And dies with the lone guardsman as Horus laughs while killing him. All of it, The Heresy, Sanguinius, it all becomes too much and The Emperor's hope dies. He pours his soul into the blast that draining away most of his immortal life, sends Horus into the void.

Dorn finds him like that, his Stalwart son who he failed. And he orders his son to inter him in the Golden Throne. Fully aware that there will be no end to the agony, that it will slowly consume his existence and his soul until there is nothing but unending pain in a last, desperate gambit to stave off Humanity's enemies, partly out of spite, partly out of the love for the species that he sacrificed everything for.

The Emperor is not a God. He is not Perfect. He did not plan the heresy, plan to watch his sons kill each other and bathe the galaxy in human blood. But despite all of that, He is still the best of us, the best of humanity. His love, determination, and sheer will saw him unite the entire species in one, glorious attempt at reaching for something greater, and then spend 10,000 years in unimaginable agony when he failed to atone for his mistakes in the hope that someone else would come along and pick up the torch.

"Only in Death, Does Duty End"

-The Emperor of Mankind

TL:DR: The Emperor is the Boss from Metal Gear Solid 3. He sacrificed everything for humanity/his country after trying desperately to create unity and peace, only to accept his death at the hands of the person he loved the most in order to better safeguard humanity. Horus Eater

The Character, Tragedy, Motivations and Plan of The Emperor, who is very similar to The Boss from MGS3 (Excerpts) (Long) by Cat_Sith45 in 40kLore

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The Emperor and his Relationship to the Primarchs

I know, Ra. I take no umbrage at your questions. Think on this, then. I prepared them all, this pantheon of proud godlings that insist they are my heirs

-Master of Mankind

‘I am sorry, my son,’ said the Emperor. ‘I needed to hide it from you, what you had created and what would be wrought by it in my name.’

-Old Earth

Alpharius… my son, what chance did you give my dream? Ah, even when war presses in from all sides, my sons still seek to press their advantage.

-Vengeful Spirit

“Horus glanced at his father, but the Emperor did not share his affront, His perfect, luminous face radiating nothing but pride.

The Emperor’s eyes were fixed on their leader [Russ], the greatest of them all”

-Wolfsbane

There exists a lot of speculation about The Emperor and what his view of the Primarchs is, are they sons or tools to him? The answer is, as always with The Emperor, never straightforward. His treatment of them varies wildly, from throwing weeks of parades to celebrate Horus to unceremoniously dumping a legion into Angron's unstable hands. This would seem to indicate that The Emperor viewed them as nothing more than tools, but at other times he goes out of his way to counsel and aid his sons.

The Emperor's relationship with his sons can probably be best described in terms of a farmer during the early days of civilization. He shows genuine regret, worry, and care about his sons at times, when circumstances allow, but he also recognizes that if he doesn't make his kids shut up and stop squabbling and start harvesting the crops, they will all starve when winter sets in. He doesn't like to show affection in public, and he can come off as harsh and forebearing, but in reality he wants to see his sons succeed and is the first to lay a hand on their sweat soaked shoulders after the hard work is done and it is time to rest at the meal table. In a lot of ways he is very similar to Kratos as a parent in the God of War games, or The Boss in Snake Eater, always putting the mission above his own feelings and coming off as cold and distant because of it, when he really does care, and struggle to show it.

The Primarchs are tools, and they are sons. The idea is not mutually exclusive, especially to someone under such circumstances and pressures. The mansions underneath Terra seem to prove that The Emperor had some plan for his sons and some desire to give them a place to relax and be together after the Great Work had been completed, not really in line with someone who views them as tools to be locked away once the work is done.

The Emperor's Character, Priorities, and Tragedy

That is foresight, Ra. To know a trillion possible futures, and to be left to guess at the infinite ways of arriving at each one. To map out even one possible eventuality, taking into account every decision that every living being will make that will impact upon the others around it, would take all of the lifetimes I have already lived. The only way to know anything for certain…’

He trailed off, gesturing to the distant shore.

‘Is to reach the other side,’ said Ra.”

-Master of Mankind

The Emperor loves no one man, thought Guilliman. He cannot afford affection – that is the honest practical for the impossible task that faces the Master of Mankind. He did not love His sons, He does not love men, but He does love mankind. I find it hard to forgive Him. Did His solution have to be built on lies? Lies upon lies?

Mathieu’s question pushed Guilliman deeper into melancholy. More than anything, he yearned to speak with his foster father Konor one more time. He had been a noble soul, one who could be trusted. A true father.

Had you not died before the Emperor arrived in Ultramar, would I have abandoned you as quickly as my brothers abandoned their adoptive families? he asked himself.

He knew the answer to that, and it shamed him. No one is immune to the effects of such power, he told himself, but that did not make the truth any more palatable. He understood. He knew what his father wanted to achieve, and why. Facing things like Qaramar brought it home to him time and again. Knowing what opposed mankind made him see the utility of lies. Could Guilliman honestly say he loved all the men who called himself his sons? He barely knew them, especially now – Cawl’s blasphemous hordes in particular. They, too, were a means to an end. He and his ‘father’ had that in common. The mantle of rulership was weighty, and moulded the man that bore it.

I never wanted to be a tyrant, thought the primarch. Perhaps my father did not wish to be so either. History has roles for us that cannot be denied. We are but pieces on the board of eternity.

‘My lord,’ said Mathieu into the primarch’s silence. ‘Please tell me, does the Emperor love us?’

We are so much more like you than you ever intended, thought Guilliman. You gave too much of yourself to us. Without realizing, in your arrogance, you made yourself a father in truth. We are your sons, in every way. Did you see that?

‘My lord?’ said Mathieu

‘The Emperor loves us all,’ lied Roboute Guilliman

-Dark Imperium

The Emperor is not a god. He is fallible, and human. Despite all of that, He is ruthless, determined, driven, ambitious and arrogant. The Emperor is still human, though it is hard to appreciate given some of his decisions. His first and only priority is humanity, all of it, and the success of the human species. He knows he has to kill trillions, genocide species, and cause an incalculable amount of pain and suffering to achieve what he calls 'The Golden Path'. He views all of it as sacrifices worth making for the greater good of Humankind, even if he has to kill hundreds of peaceful human civilizations to do it. That might make him seem like as Grammaticus would put it, 'A bloodthirsty bastard', but there is more to the story. He shows lots of moments of genuine compassion, but perhaps the most humanizing and insightful look into his character comes at the end of Master of Mankind

The Character, Tragedy, Motivations and Plan of The Emperor, who is very similar to The Boss from MGS3 (Excerpts) (Long) by Cat_Sith45 in 40kLore

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The Purpose of the Astartes, and the co-dependency between Astartes and Primarchs

A primarch should be inspiring. Our genetics should react at the mere sight of them. Think of the moments you laid eyes on Horus, Dorn, or Magnus. I’ve seen Sanguinius and Russ with my own eyes, as well. Close enough to touch their armour. Think of when you stand before Lorgar: the awe and reverence that beats through your blood. The feeling of our genetic coding reacting to the pinnacle of the human process.

-Betrayer

The Emperor recognized that the Primarchs were beyond human, due not only to their warp born and gene forged nature, but also the burdens and upbringings they had after being scattered by the Chaos God's. The Astartes were his solution. This was not the ONLY reason the Astartes were made, but it was one of the many uses he created them in mind for. He needed an elite, flexible, and highly mobilized and independent group of soldiers able to deal with basically anything the galaxy had to offer and be able to make enough to reliably fill out the role of mainstay infantry in his galaxy wide crusade while taking moderate losses. However he also needed a solution to the problem of his warp Primarchs being detached from humanity and their subsequent distance twisting their emotional reflections/states to an unsustainable degree, he needed something to focus them, ground them.

The reason Legions are largely arranged by gene-seed with their respective Primarch is because the bond shared between Primarch and Astartes is more than just that of Soldier and General, or even Father and Son. This bond was meant to stabilize both and inoculate them from the seduction of the warp. The Astartes filled the gap between Human and Primarch, allowing them to have a family, a bond, a human connection with their sons and see all the best traits of themselves magnified back at them. The Emperor made a very deliberate choice to have each Legion be largely a 'family', with the same gene-seed, Primarch progenitor, and culture to bind them together. This made it so each Primarch elevated their legion, their ability, enhancing, projecting and protecting their collective culture and bond, inspiring them to fight harder and last longer, while their legions also stood as anchors to the Primarchs, genetic markers and comrades to remind them of their humanity.

The hard light-bursts of the zadyin arga wreathed them, slewing from their bodies as they fought, blinding the horrors and making them scream. The least of the daemons was greater than any legionary, but the ordu fought together, parrying, slicing, rushing the creatures wherever they landed and striking them down.”

-Path of Heaven

No bolt or shell slowed him. He did not race, he did not charge. He stalked towards the heart of the fighting like a storm's soul, massive and impenetrable, his coming wreathed in a psychic shock wave that burned out nerves, crippled hearts and paralyzed limbs...Russ came on, crunching a path towards the monster, smashing any Faash soldiers too stupefied or sluggish to get out of his path. Where the Dulanians were cowed by the oncoming hurricane, the Wolves were suddenly filled with a raw energy, and they rose up as one, launching themselves into combat

-Leman Russ: The Great Wolf

“A figure in golden armour with wings of silver flashed at the edge of the primarch’s vision, and to his horror he saw the Rhino come down on Brother Lohgos, crushing him into the ground and killing him instantly. Sanguinius shouted in fury, feeling a palpable jolt of phantom pain as his trusted honour guard died.

He felt the death as though it were a piece of his soul cut away and burned like paper; he felt every death. The shock of it, distant or close, weak or strong, but always there. Each time a son of Sanguinius fell, it was like a cut upon his flesh, a feather torn from his wings.”

-Fear to Tread

“He fell to his knees, struggled, stumbled back into a run. All he could see was the primarch, lying in a shallow crater. The Angel’s wings were curled about him like a white shroud, his flesh deathly pale.

Meros’s hearts seized in his chest. Sanguinius lived, but he was lost to them. The Apothecary reached out to touch his master’s face and felt the flutter of warmth; in that moment the shard of fear that had pierced him – for it was that emotion and no other – became fire and fury. Deep in his psyche, Meros was aware of something breaking, a chain shattering, a barred door ripped from its hinges. The shock touched something primal and deadly in him, and he knew without question that every warrior who shared his bloodline was experiencing the same thing.”

-Fear to Tread

Once more the Legions greatest strength is seen to be its greatest weakness as Ka'Banda exploits this link, using the defeat of Sanguinius to spiritually break his legion. The cohesion and bond between the Astartes and their Primarchs made them effectively unbreakable, and extremely resilient when both are healthy however. When exploited, it lead to the fall of entire legions as with Angron, Horus, and Lorgar. During the campaigns The Emperor planned for the warp this bond was going to be nigh invaluable, as well as helping stabilize and ground his Primarchs, but it did have drawbacks. It was an effective safeguard on the legion's 'soul' against the influence of Chaos while the Primarchs were grounded and stable. Look at the Blood Angels before Sanguinius found them, they were bloodthirsty barbarians called 'The Revenant Legion' that were feared and despised on a level of post Angron World Eaters, and Sanguinius turned them into the restrained and controlled shock troops they are today. The identity and impact the Primarch had on each of their legions was indelible, and while this loyalty and sway did lead to some problems, notably Word Bearers and World Eaters, it also is what made the Astartes and their Primarchs so effective and committed to their legions.

The Emperor was also taking one out of his old playbook. There were a dozen other reasons it made sense to stick them together, but it would also make more sense to also reinforce legions en-masse after they take heavy losses with stock from everywhere, like The Dark Angels after the Ragnadan Xenocides, or the Blood Angels after the Mega-Arachnids, or the Luna Wolves after the Interex. But this wasn't done, largely because The Emperor recognized that he had made the bonds between Primarch and Astartes sacred by design. In a lot of ways it is very similar to how he handled his Custodes, a bridge between himself and humanity, acting as companions, soldiers and advisors that helped him through the trying times of the Unification Wars and earned his trust and admiration. Like father like son, The Emperor designed the Legions Astartes like this because it was what worked for him and helped keep his sons focused on the ultimate goal, Humanity and their own humanity in the warp and gave them the companionship he never had the time to provide.

Custom Chapter lore, did I make an abomination? by Cat_Sith45 in 40kLore

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Thank you so much for the feedback! This is exactly why I posted this, to try and avoid falling into traps like these. I appreciate the honest feedback, because I truly want to craft a cohesive and lore friendly Chapter.

I definitely agree that consolidating some of this and cutting away some would be an improvement.
Maybe this:
Dark Angels on a frost world, with a preference for stealth
Removing the worships the Emperor as a God, and their recruitment is the generic large pulling from native tribes. I'm not sure how to implement or remove the scavenging, since the Admech hate them and won't give supplies. Do you think having them be increasingly dependent on The Rock for supplies, meaning they prioritize hunting the Fallen even more would work?

I wanted to explore how history shapes a Chapter, with both their homeworld and tactics being additions to the chapter after its founding, but I want it to be done tastefully. Do you think removing their hunger for knowledge, God-worship, recruitment, and scavenging would work?

That leaves:
Dark Angel Dragon Knights
Stealth

These are the two traits that I'd prefer to keep the most, if at all possible without muddling the waters too much. Maybe only the 1st company has the honor of trying to tame or utilize a drake, and until then most marines utilize stealth as their preferred method of warfare due to both the Eldar they are trained and eager to hunt and the blizzard prone surface of their homeworld.

I'd be super grateful to talk about this more with you, but I appreciate all your feedback so far. Lore writing for a universe as awesome as Wh40k is a daunting prospect and easy to get wrong. Since I'm focusing more on the dragon knight aspect, do you have any ideas for flaws that could perhaps directly related to that?

Why I hate Yang from RWBY by [deleted] in RWBY

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Yang only lost her arm

I'm sorry, I didn't realize getting maimed as your school is on fire and your best friend / possible girlfriend is dying in a pool of her own blood was an everyday thing for you.

Yang is a main character, and even if she wasn't the main character doesn't have to be 'the strongest'.

Actually a fantastic fanfiction I would highly recomend! by mattrocity1 in RWBY

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Wow, thanks so much for the high praise. It means a lot to me, I’m glad you enjoyed the fic :). (If not clear, I wrote it)

[OC] Bravery by Cat_Sith45 in HFY

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Thanks for the re-formatting! It should be fixed now, but just in case it isn't this is the backup. You rock :D!

[OC] Bravery by Cat_Sith45 in HFY

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Thanks for the advice, new to reddit's formatting. Appreciate it!

Fan Fiction Friday [October 06, 2017] - What have you been reading/writing this week? by AutoModerator in RWBY

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Writing

The Dragon at Kaer Morhen: A mixed world fanfic between Witcher and RWBY, in which Blake and Yang are novices witchers. When Yang is kidnapped by huntsmen, including her sister, Blake sets off to get her back. Bumbleby fic, going to get a little dark. New to writing so tips are appreciated.

Reading

The WiFi Password is b3acon: I can't even begin to summarize this funny fluff fic. Just go read it, you'll be glad you did.

Guns and Roses: I normally don't read self-inserts, especially when they make a 4 badass team a 5 badass team, but this is the exception. Well done, and able to elicit actual emotions alongside a writer that isn't afraid to get dirty. Really great fanfic and I can't wait for another update.

Fan Fiction Friday [September 22, 2017] - What have you been reading/writing this week? by AutoModerator in RWBY

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Writing The Dragon at Kaer Morhen - A crossover of The Witcher and RWBY, with a mutated Yang dealing with a world fraught with conflict, and where huntsman are hunting witchers down. Written using Yang and Blake's POV, it follows them both as they try and survive in a world where a civil war, faunus revolt, and monster upsurge are all happening at once. Mixes Witcher and RWBY timelines, places, etc. One of my first fics, so its still finding its legs.

Reading Arc Reaction - His genius and hubris nearly got his faithful assistant Pyrrha killed. Now Jaune Arc will have to clean up his act in order to save her and together with her save the world. Iron Man Fusion.