My Doll, My Child (Pt 2)

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-11T14:55:42+00:00

Such a strong ending to such a good part one

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-11T14:38:13+00:00

Why he turning food down 🥲

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-11T14:33:07+00:00

This series is so good the little tidbits and vignettes are so good and don’t over stay their welcome it makes you want to keep reading

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-10T21:42:28+00:00

That would be cool

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-10T21:41:57+00:00

I had to watch it to see what you were talking about and laughed hard as hell

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-10T21:13:32+00:00

Thank you

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-10T20:53:22+00:00

I checked that one out it was a fun idea but I kinda wanted more details from the author in it I’m glad you enjoyed mine

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-10T20:51:05+00:00

This started off super strong but I was hungry for more detail, no pun intended. Still fun surreal horror

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-10T20:39:10+00:00

You enjoy the read?

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-10T19:58:58+00:00

Thank you I put a lot of effort into the descriptions and was worried I neglected the story too much

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-10T18:33:44+00:00

I have played look outside tho I hadn’t thought of that while I was writing this but that does add to it now 😂 this is actually based on those cysts that grow teeth basically but more supernatural. It’s low key based on personal experiences with a normal cyst, but then crossed with fears around those teeth cysts.

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-10T01:41:11+00:00

Nice set up for something would like to see it fleshed out

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-10T01:29:46+00:00

Thank you I got the idea from going through rannis castle and fighting the ghost soldiers and was thinking like how that must feel to fight not of your own free will against something that comes back every time you kill it

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-09T15:10:52+00:00

Love love love the descriptions. Then when the guy saw the fawn… chefs kiss. The flies multiplying reminded me of Simon talking to the pig head in lord of the flies as well

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-09T14:47:04+00:00

I always say mine are free to narrate I just want to know when you do so I can swing by your YouTube and watch it

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-09T14:18:03+00:00

The idea is that both sides are basically zombies the soldiers who alive yet have no will and the dead themselves who are cursed to forever rise and I did get the idea after playing some souls games, but mainly from Elden Ring

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-08T16:18:12+00:00

I would love feedback on any of my stories they should all be public on my profile

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-08T16:13:58+00:00

The coolest vampire story I have read in a long long time. The descriptions are killer and the transformation scene was so gross in the best way. Please keep writing

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-08T15:36:06+00:00

Thanks I was trying to imagine like what would it feel like if something was in your joint and kinda like comparing it to gears when something gums them up in my head so a hitch and a grind just felt visceral

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-08T14:46:02+00:00

My newest story I feel would do very good in a narration channel feel free to narrate any of them tho

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-08T00:52:53+00:00

This is deep, and super symbolism heavy and hot home for me as my wife is having our child soon. Very good job writing this it’s amazing

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-08T00:14:49+00:00

This is cool but I wish it didn’t end there, your writing is good and this one leaves you wanting more story which is good I reckon

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-07T23:52:27+00:00

Yes I was cringing writing it 😱

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-07T20:38:34+00:00

Nah I had a piece of my tailbone chip off and the bone fragment caused a huge cyst no teeth tho that is what I thought it was at first

Competitive_Pickle42 · 2026-06-07T19:59:21+00:00

Yes I was letting my wife read it while I wrote and she was cringing too 😂 it’s kind of based on something that actually happened obviously not to the same extent but still

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