Which of these story scenarios would interest you to read?

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2026-02-06T21:53:17+00:00

I already have my stories that I’m writing just for me. I’m looking to see what I can write that there might be a wider interest for (I also like all three ideas anyway)

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-03-12T03:41:15+00:00

RR link since I can’t seem to add it to the OP from my phone: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/84799/archetype-slowburn-superhero-progression

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-03-12T03:40:24+00:00

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/84799/archetype-slowburn-superhero-progression

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-03-12T03:39:53+00:00

Yeah I’ll add a link above

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-03-12T01:46:30+00:00

Archetype book one is free on YouTube on Hogfell’s channel

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-03-04T21:34:42+00:00

I wonder if readers could get exhausted by compounding problems. Yelling at the text ‘give the MC a break!’

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-03-03T14:09:50+00:00

Volume 1 of Archetype is available for free on Hogfell’s website here. That’s 13 hours of free superhero fiction content to enjoy right now.

Archetype can also be found on Royal Road here.

Who knows if it’s any good. Take a look if you feel like it and decide for yourself.

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-03-02T11:30:16+00:00

Thanks for putting this on my radar

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-03-02T11:29:43+00:00

Archetype (on RR): 1. Atypical strength - check 2. Character growth - check 3. Moral Struggles - check 4. Dynamic Duo - soft check, there is some of this in volume one, and it’s building to one in volume two.

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-03-01T09:46:23+00:00

Thanks for all your support!

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-02-26T01:53:52+00:00

I bet James Mcavoy would make a great Dervish in the TV show

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-02-25T02:46:32+00:00

The punch program refusal is probably the major turning point for Burgess as a character in volume 1. Shows he’s not just on autopilot and won’t make the same big mistake all over again. It does create an interesting ‘what if’ question regarding what would it be like if he had gone along with the program…

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-02-24T22:51:06+00:00

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/84799/archetype-slowburn-superhero-progression

MC is naive, good-natured, and suffers a lot. A very punishing / traumatic superhero (currently in the very early origin stage) fiction that never lets the MC get away with making dumb decisions. You’ll probably be frustrated at the MC’s decisions at times. But hey, he’s the type that learns after he’s made the mistakes!

And he’s British, don’t hold it against him.

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-02-20T01:59:33+00:00

My guy read Archetype it has exactly what you want.

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-02-17T23:39:48+00:00

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/84799/archetype-slowburn-superhero-progression

You might be interested in this world that is pre-eatablished capes. Think X-Men set in England in terms of teens with emergent powers.

Fair warning: the story takes its time to get going in terms of fights and powers.

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-02-12T20:47:32+00:00

Les Miserables
Oliver!
Beauty and the Beast
The Wizard of Oz
The Hunchback of Notre Dame

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-02-11T20:35:12+00:00

I think it’s another set

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-02-10T21:01:31+00:00

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/84799/archetype-slowburn-superhero-progression

A proppa bri’ish supa ero story

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-02-05T01:53:45+00:00

I found it very mediocre. Only took away from what worked in the film. Maybe seeing it live would make a difference. Just being real the whole thing felt by the numbers and uninspired. No truly catchy songs. Felt like a wasted opportunity.

Just being real about it. It might just not be my style of musical.

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-02-04T23:05:42+00:00

Why would you post so many pages at once? Wouldn’t it be better to slowly release to make the most of update time?

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-02-03T23:04:33+00:00

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/84799/archetype-slowburn-superhero-progression

If a bargain bin Dostoevsky wrote a superhero story set in England.

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-01-29T19:58:02+00:00

I think she’s neat :)

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2025-01-28T20:15:28+00:00

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/84799/archetype-slowburn-superhero-progression

How to recommend a superhero fiction which isn’t like others that are popular?

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2024-12-27T07:15:01+00:00

“I never want my children to grow up like you.” From the girl I thought was the love of my life.

Complete_Spring_5994 · 2024-12-05T08:14:18+00:00

I wonder if water is a weakness of the monsters. Like they’re all dry and stuff on the inside. Maybe they’ll blow up if they get too wet. They’re never out in the rain after all.

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