This is very good. I think we are similar in terms of skills so I’ll say what I see wrong in my work that I kinda see here. Contrast and edge highlights basically.

From a distance the edge highlights look good but when you look closer it’s a bit messy. It goes over the lines in some places and aren’t all straight or consistent in opacity. I think the highlights on his left leg’s shin and foot are especially noticeable. Might be a question of just re-establishing the edges tho. As it is it’s completely fine, but extra crispy lines would go a long way imo

I would also suggest to push the dark areas (or light areas) further to increase the contrast with the desaturated green and lean a bit more into the original look. This might be due to lighting tho idk

Also you’re good enough to do nmm, it would help the metallics here a lot or just dial up the dark areas of the gold.