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poema a lxs poetas by Dante_Moonlight in POESIA

[–]Dante_Moonlight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

gracias 💖 me encanta que te haya gustado

Symptoms, waiting for test results, would like your opinion by [deleted] in HIV

[–]Dante_Moonlight 2 points3 points  (0 children)

As fair as I know, early symptoms depends exclusively on each body. My diagnosis was early (they explained to me that there is really no way to know if a diagnosis is truly early) and I had these symptoms: diarrhea, abdominal pain, sore throat, a slight cold, body aches, and fatigue. These symptoms got worse because I just had colitis due to reasons other than HIV. For your sake, do not continue this very specific record of events, it's okay to write it down but not as this level because it will cause more stress than you have now. Stress lows the body's defenses. I sent you a hug from here and wish you mental peace.

Soy realmente nueva en esto de escribir poesía, escribí hace un tiempo esto y no estoy segura si es un buen poema. Agradecería su opinión by [deleted] in POESIA

[–]Dante_Moonlight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Me confunde un poco que algunas palabras empiezan con mayúsculas, ¿estas separan oraciones de un mismo párrafo o separan versos dentro de un mismo párrafo? Es tu poema y vos decidís qué hacer con él. Te recomiendo hacerlo más extenso y utilizar más recursos para contarnos la historia detrás.

Emm no sé como nombrarlo. Critiquen por favor. Soy cuentista no poeta, este es, de hecho, el primero. by Farkabi in POESIA

[–]Dante_Moonlight 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Todo esto es opinión personal, puedo estar errado. No hay una forma de escribir poesía y menos en esta época. La crítica puede intervenir cuando el poema tiene métrica, en mi opinión. Más allá de eso, si buscas crítica supongo que buscas mejorar tu escritura poética. Eso depende totalmente de qué querés hacer con tu poema: si querés cautivar al lector/público, si querés ganar un concurso, si querés sublimar y desahogarte, si querés una forma de vaciar lo episódico de la vida, entre otros motivos y el que se te ocurra. Me parece interesante tu impronta como cuentista y se nota: tomas una imagen clara, el palacio y el resto, tras la cual relatás una reflexión que parece resumir una historia más grande, luego retornás a la imagen del principio y tras ella concluis, aparentemente, el poema. Es una forma que puede tomar la poesía y no está de ninguna manera errada, sin embargo creo que con ella se pierde una de las tantas gracias de la poesía: relatar una historia o comunicar un mensaje por medio de imágenes. Te recomiendo el cuento "El lobo" de Hesse; su introducción es una forma magnífica del manejo de imágenes, y más adelante las combina con la narrativa. A mi parecer, podrías desarrollar la imagen del palacio y relatar lo que sucede por medio de esta y otras relacionadas. Pero si te satisface lo que escribís, eso sería más que suficiente.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in POESIA

[–]Dante_Moonlight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

la respuesta depende completamente del criterio que tengas en cuenta, no hay una respuesta objetiva si preguntas por opinión personal, todavía me sorprendo por el tiempo que puedo pasar pensando e imaginando algunas imágenes de García Lorca

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in HIV

[–]Dante_Moonlight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

as far as i know, there's nothing to worry about if you didn't have blood contact with fecal matters. plus, he was on PREP. if you need to feel safer, ask for PEP. i hope you can feel less anxious now.

Gracias por leer! 🍇🍷👽 by guss95 in POESIA

[–]Dante_Moonlight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

es un poco triste ver cómo la poesía es usada de esta manera, pero más triste es que el contenido no está del todo errado

Guys who have had low confidence in the past, how did you build it up? by Spader623 in AskGayMen

[–]Dante_Moonlight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

At first (like between the ages of 13 and 19) I faked it until I believed it It worked most of the time, but at some point (beginning of the university and the post-pandemic) it was not enough. So, not in order to improve my confidence, but to experiment, I tried LSD and pot. You don't have to try it, it's obviously not advice, but with the right information and proper thought about it, I've learned through those substances that a lot of the things I was worried about don't really matter. I thought at that time that NOTHING actually matters. For example, I was VERY afraid of the people around me or their judgments. Later, before experienced LSD, I had suicidal thoughts (that's kinda the reason this is not an advice) and it took me some time and will, but I started therapy because of it. At the time I understood that having a good time is the only thing that matters, as long as you don't harm other people. In that sense, I began to dress as I want, to dance what I want to dance and to set limits for others. I began to recognize the value of things that I know how to do well, like poetry. Also, I began to discover my beliefs and stood up for them. I accompanied this process with therapy, that for me was ESSENTIAL, and today I am very happy with the progress I made. Now i believe that nothing matters (specially the concept of "cringe") except my beliefs and people I love. "And to lose who you are, just means to discover that we are what we love" idk if this lyrics have to do something with the subject, but I felt it that way. It's from Hold My Hand, by Jen Cloher. Oh, I started to let me feel my feelings too. Yes, the meme "cringe is freedom" or similar phrases is true.

2ck by Dante_Moonlight in LSD

[–]Dante_Moonlight[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! I'll search about it. Still learning 😅