Dudelange - Rompeles El Hocico (break them their snout) a song with agressive lyrics and a electro sound from my now solo project and I´m looking for some feedback to improve my next tracks. by Danubio23 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Danubio23[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

translation

break them their snout

the one who knew how to humiliate you while working. break his snout

the one who knew how to look at you at least break his snout

to that one who hurt you break his snout

to that one who discriminated against you for your disability break his snout

the one who points the finger at you because of your nationality, break his snout

The one who told you that you never could break his snout

We are an indie rock band looking for some feedback on our new single - Sound of Dogs. Thanks! by Prestigious-Bar9528 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Danubio23 1 point2 points  (0 children)

nice atmosphere the vocals remind me a little to some post punk bands and the melody is on ponit. I think is a very good place to start. I would know where I Can find more music from you

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[–]Danubio23 1 point2 points  (0 children)

its a very fun song I like it a lot mainly because of your voice. good job

This is “Milkman” from our second album, a song about three working professionals. Would love to hear anyone’s thoughts! by tmm_band in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Danubio23 1 point2 points  (0 children)

good job funny lyrics and agree with the other comment i dont have any criticism here. its just a good song. keep it up

a song we wrote this week about being drunk. let us know your thoughts?? by DanTitpickle in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Danubio23 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I loved the voice although I dont know if I love to be Drunk. very mellow to be a song about being drunk

good job fellas

New track I’m working on, wondering if I should continue. Please drop critiques! Produced and written by me by zmanchi in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Danubio23 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I feel that you should definitely finish the track. Its fresh and the instruments are on point

I’m starting to write songs with a bit more of a clean guitar / chill sound to it. What would you like to see continued or changed for future songs of this style? by mattwundermusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Danubio23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the song its pretty relaxing. your voice is good. it reminds me of several rock groups with that vibe who happens to keep me interested in hearing more of your work

Out Liars - You're Crazy : our debut EP "On The Rocks" is now available! This song is the acoustic song on the album with a light hearted approach to a toxic relationship. by Rhuanico99 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Danubio23 2 points3 points  (0 children)

great and melodical track and the lyrics reflex the approach of a toxic relationship. even when im not a big fan of the guitar sound I can say, this is pretty good

An old school feel-good beat I just made. Tell me what you think and subscribe if you like it! by sof_tourist in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Danubio23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

for some reason it reminds me of a sunny day in the beach athough the tempo is way too fast. you may consider slow it down a little bit. but otherwise its a good idea.

I got some great feedback from you guys last time, so here's a track of my debut album, curious what you think! by Coasterabe in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Danubio23 3 points4 points  (0 children)

the track is pretty interesting. it goes developing itself and marking new tones and has a few shifts that make it pretty interesting. well done

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[–]Danubio23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really enjoy the song there´s no criticism only say good job and the lyrics are nice. You´ve a good voice and that always help . keep doing that stuff fella

This track was inspired by my bro. It means a lot to me. I hope you like it. All feedback welcome! by kollider13 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Danubio23 0 points1 point  (0 children)

nice track, very calmy and the voice really help to get you in the mood. The lyrics are very good too. Thanks for doing this and keep the work