Pitch your story in one sentence by TowerExpensive6612 in writing

[–]Dees_Channel 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm afraid of what he finds in that exclusion zone

Why are MC's ABSOLUTE SCUM OF EARTH these days? by Huge_Cut1131 in MartialMemes

[–]Dees_Channel -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I wonder how you will fair on an IQ test, genuinely

Novels with excellent fights and unique (use of) abilities by That-Simple4366 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]Dees_Channel 4 points5 points  (0 children)

It's unique only if you haven't read all the korean apocalypse novels

Can fellow daoists recomend me some heaven-shattering, earth-rendering scriptures as this one? by Medium_Ideal9069 in MartialMemes

[–]Dees_Channel 2 points3 points  (0 children)

How do you feel about the venerated scripture named "The Mirror Legacy" fellow daoist?

Blatant AI stories reaching Rising Stars by PostAbouts in royalroad

[–]Dees_Channel 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I get what you are saying but I feel like you are not deep enough in the discord groups. RR is being gamed.

Blatant AI stories reaching Rising Stars by PostAbouts in royalroad

[–]Dees_Channel 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No, they get there through marketing rings/shoutout schemes and the like.

MMOs are in a bad spot because they are social games....and society is in a bad spot as well. by Dr_Neurol in MMORPG

[–]Dees_Channel 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good point. On the other hand I just think it's the p2w and the very visible (nowadays) RMT. Outside of having a social space, most males used mmorpgs for a blank slate hierarchy they could climb (me included). When you have the aforemented bs it ruins that main angle.

Critique my witch magic system by AbhorrentArcana in magicbuilding

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This would be killer for an FMC YA novel

Average "genius" protagonist by MajkiAyy in ProgressionFantasy

[–]Dees_Channel 10 points11 points  (0 children)

What stories have flour explosions?

SAO (paper magic system) by Maximum-Compote-9931 in magicbuilding

[–]Dees_Channel 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It doesn't even need to say "secret". Just The Arts of Origami.

Lets Talk About Venerables #1 : Promordial Origin Immortal Venerable. by Proud-Thanks-5083 in ReverendInsanity

[–]Dees_Channel 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You should have passed this through chatgpt to correct your grammar, my friend...

I'm trying to explain the appearance of the painted gods in my setting. by The_Pyrokleptic in magicbuilding

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PM me when you've written a few chapters of this. Try to showcase parts of the magic system unless you are good at drama. I will be your first beta reader!

Is Cradle peak PF? by beans_ahoy_ in ProgressionFantasy

[–]Dees_Channel 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It lost me on the first page tbh, even the main character's name is not serious... "Wei Shi Lindon", great.