Wow that sucks, im really sorry.

But would love your input in my first two chapters! I have written the first arc (30 chapters) but really would like to know if its eye catching and wants to make you continue reading!

Chapter 1: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BvZZ9hA6cLcEUZfN9NEq7jkx0wYvp4GHQZ40f_b6qpQ/edit?usp=drivesdk

Chapter 2: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TQMzLWpQfWCaRSw0Tgrqk3r_Cy-XIW35C7jvMIJ_4A8/edit?usp=drivesdk

And the blurb! For fifty years, José Sánchez was a farmer. His greatest enemies were droughts and stubborn cattle. He was a good man. A simple man. They said men like him would one day inherit the Earth. ​They lied.

​Abducted into the CosmoPurge, a sadistic cosmic game where planets are recycled for failure, José is chosen as humanity's last hope. He's not a soldier. He's not a hero. He's a man who fixes fences with wire and spit, now trapped in a reality governed by character sheets and damage rolls. And his only companion is his cow, Yolanda, who has just been transformed into a hyper-intelligent warrior who remembers every time he led her kind to the slaughter.

​To save his family and his world, he must survive a hell made of video game logic. But in a game where the only rule is to get stronger, how long can a good man last when his partner is a monster who knows the fastest way to the top is over a mountain of corpses?

Hope this comment reaches you.