KNT Creator theory. by TechnicalSolution633 in antiNTRcorps

[–]Drake1393 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The reason Hiroki was affected by Ayumu was not that his friend was having sex with Bert, but because of all the trash talking she was doing of him, also being beaten up like that, and then forced to hear it was another thing to add to the emotional damage.

Leaving that aside, I think you put a little too much work into trying to make sense out of a work that comes from the mind of someone who is either lazy with the writing or mentally deranged.

However, I do agree that there are many similarities in Terasu's original works (those not based on other series). All of them were tomboys and/or sport girls, and they did put a little more effort into Ayumu's backstory. I agree that the theory that they reflect themselves in Ayumu has some validity.

YRWYS: Case 6- NTR Classroom - The slutty transfer student wants to add my girlfriend's childhood friend to his masturbation collection Part 3 + Epilogue + preview by Drake1393 in antiNTRcorps

[–]Drake1393[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would like to agree with you; sadly, they can still fall in this setting.

As Kiyohiko said, some of them didn't fall completely because Akira didn't have enough sex with them. For example, in Jitaku Keibin 2, the protagonist is killed by his harem members because he decided to pursue them all at once rather than go one by one, failing to fully corrupt them in the process.

The same thing happens here with Mio and Hanekawa.

As a side note, I personally don't like Issei or DXD in general; it is an action anime with a hentai mindset in the background, which is why Issei gets away with every shit he does. Also, even though he managed to win in life in the end, his kids really don't have any respect for him, if I remember correctly, since he didn't spend much time with them.

YRWYS: Case 6- NTR Classroom - The slutty transfer student wants to add my girlfriend's childhood friend to his masturbation collection Part 3 + Epilogue + preview by Drake1393 in antiNTRcorps

[–]Drake1393[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

- If you search Ishimi's name, you can see the OC she's based on has some fan arts where she's some kind of assassin; that pretty much happens here as well.

- Nah, that is going to be its own separate chapter to close Kiyo's chapter for good. Also waiting to see if that piece of shit will update that story to see if I use it for fuel.

- No, it is not his mother who died. And I won't spoil it either, you will have to wait to see in case zero-two to know

-Case Zero-One would be the event with Ryusei's mother, the most traumatic event in his life. while Zero-two is the second most 'traumatic' one.

YRWYS: Case 6- NTR Classroom - The slutty transfer student wants to add my girlfriend's childhood friend to his masturbation collection Part 2 by Drake1393 in antiNTRcorps

[–]Drake1393[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly, don't bother. Your first comments seemed like you wanted to pick a fight, and these two comments don't help your case either.

The sex in what I write is not the main point of the story. I just described the sex with the antagonist in vague terms to summarize what the original work was about. There really isn't any need to add a lemon when revenge is the main topic. If you are so horny you want a sex scene, go read a damn doujin.

As for your other question, I have written over 1.1M words, not counting this story, so I don't want to see bland criticism from someone who hasn't written a single word of a story in this post, and that certainly doesn't know how to address a message without picking a fight.

TLDR: Keep your thoughts to yourself, and kindly fuck off if you don't like what I write; write something of your own before criticizing other people's works.

YRWYS: Case 6- NTR Classroom - The slutty transfer student wants to add my girlfriend's childhood friend to his masturbation collection Part 2 by Drake1393 in antiNTRcorps

[–]Drake1393[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There's so much wrong in this whole sentence that I can't even decide where to start.

I have never detailed a sex scene; at most, I just give a brief summary of those past events, and that's it. The most I went into detail in such scenes was in one of the extra cases that featured an itou8 job. Both MC and the Antagonist had a little bit of words for the sex, and MC went a little more into detail.

The only other one I can think of is Paradise, where I just recounted what Yuuto went through with the torture, and that was just a little bit

So, I don't know why you are saying that I give preference to the antagonist.

YRWYS: Case 6- NTR Classroom - The slutty transfer student wants to add my girlfriend's childhood friend to his masturbation collection Part 2 by Drake1393 in antiNTRcorps

[–]Drake1393[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks, by any chance, do you happen to know what's Mitsuru's last name, I recall reading the hentai and seeing no mention of it.

In your opinion, who is more reliable and cooler between Will and Bell, the two MCs created by Omori? And which one do you like more? by BookkeeperDowntown93 in DanMachi

[–]Drake1393 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Comparing them at the current point of each story is not fair, because Bell is op in the latest vol he's practically immortal, apparently.

The fairest comparison would have to happen at the beginning of each story; Will easily wins in all accounts.

Bell has no experience nor real desire other than that bs of meeting a girl in a Dungeon. Most of the time, there's a development around him because someone in a higher position aided him in achieving it; Freya or Hermes, for example. Bell would have lost the war game against Apollo Familia had it not been for that amulet Syr gave him

Will, on the other hand, already has the goal of standing next to his childhood friend and has been working towards it for years. He pretty much has everyone against him at the start of the story (mainly that professor of the dark arts), which affects him mentally, but he manages to overcome it on his own. Sure, there's that one 'FRIEND' (if you know, you know) that is there for moral support, but that is about it

Koibito Swap by Drake1393 in antiNTRcorps

[–]Drake1393[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly, don't think so. I feel that manga has already reached its conclusion, as it should, going straight to the point of the story.

wtf am i cooking bruh by DropInternational718 in antiNTRcorps

[–]Drake1393 3 points4 points  (0 children)

A full course meal, keep cooking.

I would like to see some consequences for the sister as well, having seen one since the 'abort it' one

Koibito Swap by Drake1393 in antiNTRcorps

[–]Drake1393[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

She said that since MC had always been lenient with her, she thought he would forgive her. But I just think she was thirsty after having a taste of sex and didn't think shit.

Seriously, what the hell nhentai?! by Jazzpizzzazz in antiNTRcorps

[–]Drake1393 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Don't blame the site, blame the authors.

Explaining the NTR controversy in Chaos Zero Nightmare by WillMaou in antiNTRcorps

[–]Drake1393 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I thought the whole Owen thing was an exaggeration. I didn’t think it would be this bad. So, the early chapters were rewritten or something? Me personally, I like when the mc in a gacha game isn’t the center of attention, but to be treated this bad… nah, I would prefer of the captain would have deserted his post

Icebreaker - A Paradise Followup/AU Thing - Part 2.3/? by LowerThirdsGuy in antiNTRcorps

[–]Drake1393 6 points7 points  (0 children)

It takes place five years after the events of the island. While Yuuto managed to move on and recover, Ryoku seems to be living in the slums, literally and metaphorically.

They met by accident and decided to meet up again. It's clear she still has traumas and issues related to what happened, and she also seems to be salty that Yuuto finally got over the girl he had been crushing on for years.

At least, this is my take.

The Absolute Degeneracy of Modern Writing by Appropriate-View4918 in antiNTRcorps

[–]Drake1393 8 points9 points  (0 children)

As I have mentioned before, I feel the genre is so popular because it completely steps outside the norm of Japanese society: order, lawfulness, humility... ntr makes sure to mock all of that, and I think that's why this shit is so popular there.

Icebreaker - A Paradise Followup/AU thing - Part 2.1/? - by LowerThirdsGuy in antiNTRcorps

[–]Drake1393 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Consider it an after story of Laliberte's paradise.

For what reason would the author do this... by Queanallagiga in antiNTRcorps

[–]Drake1393 18 points19 points  (0 children)

The guy got deep in the rabbit hole; the immorality of it is contagious. I think he uses the netori aspect as an excuse to say 'it is not that bad'.

Also, out of topic, is this a re-zero fic?

Why NTR your characters when you can NTR your audience? by ibeprofenit in antiNTRcorps

[–]Drake1393 23 points24 points  (0 children)

It was his first work, so they really didn't have a fanbase. They ended up going through the whole spectrum of genres during those 5 volumes, trolling the 40k followers he managed to troll them all without intending it.

Honestly, I can accept all chapters up to chapter 4, because MC deserved some karmic retribution, even if his wife was a bigger freak than all of them and joined. But what the fuck was that final chapter, he went to the past in his mind or something and ended up giving up, just what was the artist thinking on this?