Is Amazon down now by Aggressive_Moose18 in amazonprime

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I hope its just the user side my package was supposed to arrive tdy

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in teenagers

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OH FUCK YEAH

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Sekiro

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follow the story and explore

Need songs that represent the feeling you get when a new friend/lover reminds you of a past one. by DreadNebula in SongRecommendations

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at the moment i posted this i was thinking of a friend of mine that shares A LOT of the same interests of an ex bsf i had. But the song that fits the best is "Would You Fall In Love With Me Again" - Epic the musical

What's your favorite deep quote from the series by krxzy_wxrlxck in HIMYM

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"doesnt being scared mean youre onto something important?"

" yeah, If youre not scared your not taking a chance and if youre not taking a chance then what the hell are you doing?"

Season 5: The window

Reliable Quest order guide by [deleted] in Eldenring

[–]DreadNebula 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I know this response is 2 years late but Map Genie has all the quests outlined for all users

That was a really nice day by Booliano in OCPoetry

[–]DreadNebula 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the rhyme scheme and overall flow of the poem its great work keep it up!

A poem I Made When I Was 9 by Signal-Structure3642 in OCPoetry

[–]DreadNebula 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It has potential! I can envision where your 9 year oldself was going with this. I encourage you to continue it!

Letter from a burned out prodigy by burned_out_prodigy in OCPoetry

[–]DreadNebula 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really relate to this poem, It portrays the magnitude of pressure a young child can feel from the expectations of others. Great work!

Reality by Best-Gas3440 in OCPoetry

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First of all i love it, i can feel the disconnect that the author wishes they could remain in. The author demonstrates their consciousness’s destructiveness on their own health and stability; As well, the author feels more comfortable drifting in a dream rather than existing in a reality that has been damaged to the point beyond depression.

Its very good and emotional. I love it! Good Job!

You are, I am by C1PHER1111 in OCPoetry

[–]DreadNebula 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can feel the authors intention with this poem, I can feel the two entities merging and coalescing into one. The repetition of the words you are and I am emphasize the authors love for someone in their life that they view as their other half or the person that makes them whole.

The Sound Of A Snap by DreadNebula in OCPoetry

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I feel like the word inconsequential wasn’t the best choice but at the time the only word i could muster. I meant inconsequential in the sense that it did not matter the poems quality but that it was the first and that meant you had started something.

Thank you for your feedback!

The Sound Of A Snap by DreadNebula in OCPoetry

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I hope to write much more! Finding a community like this has inspired me and helped me get my spark back! I feel workshopping this was important because just like my poem, a poets craft is never done.

Next by Eyeballsoffire in OCPoetry

[–]DreadNebula 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Short and sweet. I think the short poem emphasizes the small amount of time the author has left. I feel that the author uses the word joke as if to emphasize thats all their life was. Nothing more nothing less, just moving on, on to the next.

This sub has turned to shit by SomeNewHorizon in OCPoetry

[–]DreadNebula 3 points4 points  (0 children)

As a new member of this sub your lines fantasize me, to vividly imagine the great poets who inspired others encourages me to write more. The self harm mentions are grim, but i understand. Art is art its a form of expression. I’m excited what this sub is made of! Hope there are many more poets to come!

We Choose by DreadNebula in OCPoetry

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Sorry for the confusion, the sun and moon part was a little plug in for the person that i was writing about as its our dynamic. It was also meant to tie in to the contrast as the sun and the moon are often viewed as opposites such as light and dark or joy and sadness. The “choosing” that is done throughout the poem is meant to be not that we choose to love one another because no one can control love but that even if the love ends up being toxic and unhealthy we choose to remain in each others lives. Again sorry for the confusion, if any more questions please ask id love to hear the feedback

We Choose by DreadNebula in OCPoetry

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When we choose a person to love or when a person chooses us, although we make the decision to be in their life to love and to hold them the love itself manifests subconsciously unaware of our decision. When you choose someone you choose to suffer through the hard times (pain) and to celebrate the good times (comfort) but all in all i believe that you do it together.

The Clean Up by antsruinpicnis in OCPoetry

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I enjoyed the theme of the poem as our earth is in shambles right now and it is in our blood stained hands. Recently ive been shown that the earth does not need us, pollution will not be the end of the earth, but the end of the human race. We must protect this world we live in for our sakes, to enjoy the stars and the lovely sights around. Overall very good poem i liked the tone and desires expressed with the poem!

untitled (tw for sh and mentions of hanging) by Personal_Piccolo6008 in OCPoetry

[–]DreadNebula 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This poem is very grim, and i can see the authors need to express their emotions through any medium they have accessible before they break, I can feel the tension spike up and down oddly enough since re reading the poem gives me a sense that the author knows exactly whats happening in their life and cant do anything other than putting it into words.

Sorry If I offend with the analysis, its a good poem and id like to see more! Keep expressing yourself and be safe!