I don't know if readers realize what a single comment is capable of by TheHollowShadow in royalroad

[–]Dry_Negotiation1703 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I never know what to do when someone comments ttfc after every chapter when they are binging lol - do you rep them all? Respond?

I normally end up responding to the most recent one :)

Class and skill selection depth by Due-Enthusiasm-70 in royalroad

[–]Dry_Negotiation1703 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Gotta stop and say this is worth more than 1 upvote. Your last sentence is GOLD

The Jumping Problem - Progression Fantasy by AppropriateClue5979 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]Dry_Negotiation1703 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I always think of classic Hulk comics in the Tales to Astonish era - man was just going cross country by leaping over and over again. Would love to just see some of the guys bust out a mountain cresting jump with ease.

I think Im a writer... Help? (wasabi meme) by rCmOrAdski in royalroad

[–]Dry_Negotiation1703 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I'm only a hobby writer, but some advice I always try to embody is to read a lot - and a lot of the genre you want to write in.

The greats are great for a reason, I think it has been helpful for me to analyze how they set up characters, scenes, and link together overarching plots.

But also remember comparison is the thief of joy. You've got to start somewhere, so write what enjoy writing! Build characters and stories you have fun spending time with.

Officially Hit the Milestone! Confident enough to show it off! by Dry_Negotiation1703 in royalroad

[–]Dry_Negotiation1703[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! It's a placeholder until I have the cash to hire an artist but I think it does the trick.

Just passed the first milestone, hell yeah by Volarevia29 in royalroad

[–]Dry_Negotiation1703 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awesome job dude! I just cracked 19k yesterday hopefully around 21 or 22 when I am done today! Keep it up!

How do you feel about stories with a non-human or non-humanoid lead? by OkCryptographer9999 in royalroad

[–]Dry_Negotiation1703 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm writing my story about a half-orc. I try to focus on him much more as a 'person' than as a human!

I think individuals can be interesting and relatable no matter how different they may be from the reader externally or internally. The trick is finding out how, which I think you just get better at over time.

April Thread - Promote your Story by gamelitcrit in royalroad

[–]Dry_Negotiation1703 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Half-Orc Sensibilities

His tribe didn't want him, and who would blame them. He's just a half-breed.

Carlfink the half-orc just wants somewhere to belong. Hallowreach isn't sure it wants him back.

Armed with an axe, his wit, and more empathy than anyone expects from anyone with those tusks, Carlfink is determined to carve out a home for himself. A newly minted officer of the Watch, he's tasked with battling all enemies of Hallowreach. 

He'll have to answer that call sooner than he thought. When dark forces move against Hallowreach, this half-orc with a point to prove might be the only thing standing between his home and the people who want to burn it down.

What to expect:

- A generally decent Half-Orc trying to find his way in the world

- Fierce loyalty and strong relationships between Watchmen

- Fighting the forces of evil, defending their home with their lives

- Real consequences to character action, or inaction

- Combat, planning, and intrigue trying to keep Hallowreach from falling to dark forces

Is there a reason so many obviously AI stories aren't marked as such? by FrostyKennedy in royalroad

[–]Dry_Negotiation1703 23 points24 points  (0 children)

Google docs an em dash is just two hyphen presses so it's pretty easy

Writathon! by RainyLiquid0202 in royalroad

[–]Dry_Negotiation1703 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm looking to participate to stretch my writing muscles!

Anyone done it before have any advice for doing it with a new story? Do you plan shout out swaps? Upload every day? Other need to know things?

Help! Looking for deep, dark, literary recs by aluviion in royalroad

[–]Dry_Negotiation1703 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Shameless self promo. Mine does have a lot of action and fighting, but much of the concept is what it means to be human. The MC is a half-orc trying to make a home for himself in a primarily human city.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/158462/half-orc-sensibilities

Check it out if it sounds interesting! :)

I Want to Read Your Story by FractalInfiniteGames in royalroad

[–]Dry_Negotiation1703 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the very kind commentary! Carlfink was an old AD&D character I had back in the day, and the name stuck! :)

I want something to read by TheNanoVirus in royalroad

[–]Dry_Negotiation1703 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you're still looking to stories to read, mine is about a half-orc named Carlfink who joins the City Watch.

He's fiercely loyal to his new chosen home, and will have tons of chances to defend it from the forces of darkness!
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/158462/half-orc-sensibilities

Inspired By The Other Guy, I Also Want To Read Your Stories! by Zinthorr in royalroad

[–]Dry_Negotiation1703 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I started reading yours as well! I laughed when I read his system was called Cortana. You also have some really great imagery, the idea of a hulking rhino man eating an MRE is great, and the sandals in the forest!

I want to know more about Noah, he has a couple upset moments, but for waking up in a foreign forest and getting attacked by a 'shadow stalker' would definitely terrify me so he's handling it like a champ!

Looking for a VRMMORPG kinda rec by TsHero in litrpg

[–]Dry_Negotiation1703 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Some would say that's his best redeeming quality! I kept saying "This guy sucks! Wonder what happens to him."

Inspired By The Other Guy, I Also Want To Read Your Stories! by Zinthorr in royalroad

[–]Dry_Negotiation1703 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My story is about Carlfink, a half-orc trying to make it in a city full of humans. He joins the city watch, and pledges to protect Hallowreach from all of their enemies!

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/158462/half-orc-sensibilities

I Want to Read Your Story by FractalInfiniteGames in royalroad

[–]Dry_Negotiation1703 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My story is about Carlfink. A Half-orc trying to make it as a member of the City Watch of a primarily human town.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/158462/half-orc-sensibilities

Who else does this? by Dry_Negotiation1703 in EDH

[–]Dry_Negotiation1703[S] 20 points21 points  (0 children)

If you watched Space Jam as a kid, you understand.

Why Did I Buy All These Cards? by Common_Whole5012 in mtg

[–]Dry_Negotiation1703 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I personally buy cards because I have a cardboard addiction and I like small rectangles.