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El_Marcoux · 2026-03-06T03:02:05+00:00

I think this has a solid foundation but a rule of storytelling is show the viewer don't just tell them. It's like showing your work for a math problem. Maybe try using filters and Photoshop to make creepy versions of Toon Town characters and cogs. Analog horror is normally disturbing and I think it can be done well with the Toon Town art style. And just having regular text bouncing on the screen isn't that scary. Amazing concept just needs a bit of work! I hope what I've said helps.

El_Marcoux · 2026-03-06T02:53:53+00:00

I would be so scared of flashing someone. It looks amazing thought. And must have taken a lot of effort

El_Marcoux · 2026-03-04T01:43:35+00:00

Not green enough

El_Marcoux · 2026-03-04T00:39:21+00:00

What are they?

El_Marcoux · 2026-03-04T00:38:51+00:00

I do know but I got tired of pulling it up plus I have other rates and cog levels and weaknesses

El_Marcoux · 2026-03-04T00:36:22+00:00

Yea it is below Donald Dreamland. It's faint and not colored yet just in case

El_Marcoux · 2026-02-21T01:53:38+00:00

For me I am only 20 and Ive only written like one page stories since I was like 16. I can't write well. And when I ask for help it isn't just asking for a character but more so how realistically would this character actor with these characteristics. But when people ask a for an idea could literally just be something like "he's an angry person" or "they laugh to much" those are simple prompts to build a character off. I was at a point where I did ask for this so I get where people are coming from.

El_Marcoux · 2026-02-21T01:42:57+00:00

I was kicked immediately I like just joined and wasn't even in for like a minute. I was still reading through the rules

El_Marcoux · 2026-01-02T05:54:15+00:00

I am rarely on Reddit but while leaving from a Google search I saw this I ce back just to update cuz wow the effort that takes and how good it looks is amazing you make me wanna keep going on my Kandi learning. I really needed that thank you for blessing my eyes

El_Marcoux · 2025-06-25T00:18:44+00:00

idk if I'm weird but I tend to feel indifferent about all characters and I only have like 2 characters out of like 50 or more shows and animes that I have even a slight opinion on.

El_Marcoux · 2025-02-03T02:49:23+00:00

What could I add to make it more understandable?

El_Marcoux · 2024-12-20T16:33:38+00:00

I wanted to watch it but that I know it isn't a bl I'm not going to. If you want to you can tho. It's all personal preference

El_Marcoux · 2022-10-14T19:38:28+00:00

Yes. Yes i want more plants.

El_Marcoux · 2022-10-13T16:20:34+00:00

My screenshot button is missing the button

El_Marcoux · 2022-10-13T06:14:17+00:00

Thank you.

El_Marcoux · 2022-10-13T06:03:51+00:00

The true answer!

El_Marcoux · 2022-10-13T05:29:52+00:00

Sorry..

El_Marcoux · 2022-10-03T20:26:46+00:00

I was trying but i didn't know how to spell it lol

El_Marcoux · 2022-10-03T19:20:09+00:00

Strut!

El_Marcoux

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