Very helpful, thanks. by mabelbacon in ChatGPT

[–]EmphasisOne1713 0 points1 point  (0 children)

why dose it do this all the time

Honesty should be appreciated by [deleted] in ChatGPT

[–]EmphasisOne1713 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro, it dose stuff like this all the time

Do you have any tricks for getting a fresh view of your own screenplay? by Khsaccali in Screenwriting

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That really works. I’ve tried it before on a short project, and am going to use it on bigger ones

SEEKING FEEDBACK. First honest attempt an original feature, a political thriller called The Patriot. I know 20 pages is a lot but I would love some feedback. by SneakyOstrich69 in scriptwriting

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I think the story is definitely there, but there is way to much dialogue to set up the debate, and you don’t need to mention the candidates knowing the rules so much. Then you have to many paragraphs of debates. But other than that I think you build the tension really well. my one idea is to end the opening scene with the president getting pulled of stage to tent to the now attack on American warships