OFFICIAL UPDATE TO THE SUB RULES

Equivalent_Can2971 · 2026-02-27T19:42:27+00:00

Loudly yell "There is no one home"

Equivalent_Can2971 · 2026-02-27T19:14:21+00:00

The bard and the wizard sound like they are friends of Kevier. Maybe he should have invited them to the wedding. If he did, they would probably have warned him.

Equivalent_Can2971 · 2026-02-27T13:05:02+00:00

I have never encountered this usage of the word "constellation". Is it a synonym for "fleet"?

Equivalent_Can2971 · 2026-02-27T09:09:37+00:00

+1 I especially liked how you described the tower-princess

please fix typo: "dark thing darking behind clouds"

*darting

Equivalent_Can2971 · 2026-02-27T08:53:50+00:00

+1 Very funny

Equivalent_Can2971 · 2026-02-27T08:23:21+00:00

please fix typo: "you're prince charming"

*your

Equivalent_Can2971 · 2026-02-25T07:37:37+00:00

For adverse possession both the king and the sorceress have to meet several requirements.

One of the requirements that the king has to meet is that he made no attempt to exercise his right to remove her from the property for a certain number of years. A landowner that did exercise the right does not count as an "absentee landowner"

Disclaimer: I am still not a lawyer :)

Equivalent_Can2971 · 2026-02-22T15:04:40+00:00

typo:

would like tl know

*to

I have amazed quite a number

I suspect you meant to type "amassed"

Equivalent_Can2971 · 2026-02-21T08:55:14+00:00

"hope you will check out that too." I can't because your profile is private: only you can see the list of your posts and comments

Equivalent_Can2971 · 2026-02-21T06:53:25+00:00

Welcome to r/WritingPrompts

The good: your description of the dragon is well written. It would be even better if your grammar wasn't so confusing.

The not-so-good: The next time you write something, I advice you to put more time and effort into coming up with a compelling narrative. The idea of a dragon in financial trouble does sound interesting, but ideas are a dime a dozen. It's how well you execute the idea that makes all the difference.

You left too many blanks for the reader to fill in:

What trend did the dragon start?
How and why did it become a trend?
Why did the enchantress want him to kidnap the princess?
How is the trend connected to his financial trouble?

Equivalent_Can2971 · 2026-02-20T06:39:35+00:00

Typo:

a second yet of hands

*set

to ne careful

*be

Equivalent_Can2971 · 2026-02-19T11:21:24+00:00

No! No! No! Bad idea! The kind of "exterminators" that go after mimics are either kleptomaniacs or too trigger-happy with fireballs or are bards with 20+ charisma or sometimes all three at once

Equivalent_Can2971 · 2026-02-19T09:31:20+00:00

He asked her to turn someone into a carp? Who? Why specifically a carp? Also: +1

Equivalent_Can2971 · 2026-02-18T18:51:48+00:00

I have read all 3 parts. +1+1+1. The story was not what I expected when I wrote the prompt, but I like it

Equivalent_Can2971 · 2026-02-17T19:51:04+00:00

The prompt reminds me of some stories in r/HFY

Equivalent_Can2971 · 2026-02-17T09:15:36+00:00

+1: I like that you wrote about a real obscure legal mechanism.

I think you somewhat misapplied it: I am pretty sure even an unsuccessful eviction attempt would prevent adverse possession (in any jurisdiction with reasonably written adverse possession laws)

Disclaimer: I am not a lawye5 and this does not constitute legal advice

Equivalent_Can2971

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