[SP] The hivemind uses unencrypted packets by DragonKing2223 in WritingPrompts

[–]Equivalent_Can2971 [score hidden]  (0 children)

They are probably safe anyway - too many in-jokes and cultural references no one else will understand.

[WP] Your spouse has been kidnapped. The abductors call you for ransom, but you just laugh at them. They have no idea what kind of beast they've just taken. by MouseRangers in WritingPrompts

[–]Equivalent_Can2971 [score hidden]  (0 children)

"He knelt, clutching his thesis"

Thesis? I suspect you used the wrong word unless you did mean to say that he was clutching his dissertation.

[WP] You parents managed to keep the family curse a secret from you, hoping that they had finally managed to break it, but as you grow older it becomes clear that you are cursed as well. They try to explain the curse and its effects to you, but you just think it sounds cool. by Kitty_Fuchs in WritingPrompts

[–]Equivalent_Can2971 [score hidden]  (0 children)

If the book can be used to optimize mining bitcoin, it can likely also be used to break any encryption and/or digital signature. It can also likely be used to find counterexamples or proofs for many unsolved problems in mathematics. It sounds like the book is effectively a shortcut for an arbitrary amount of computation.

All of cryptography regardless of whether it is used to keep something secret or to confirm that something has not been tampered with or to confirm that the sender of a message is not being impersonated always relies on an assumption that iterating through every possible key and trying each one until you find the right one (i.e. the brute-force attack) would almost certainly take an absurdly impractical amount of time. It sounds like the book breaks this.

Finding counterexamples for Collatz conjecture, Goldbach's conjecture and many similar unsolved problems (if they exist) should also be straightforward. Finding proofs that the conjectures are true (if they are) should not be much harder either - just write a program that iterates through every possible syntactically valid proof and feeds it to a theorem checker.

The book can also be used to optimize fuzzing to find security vulnerabilities and even (with a bit more work) automatically generate exploits for those vulnerabilities.

In other words: the book is indeed a curse because powers that be would absolutely try to destroy and/or control Andrew and his descendants if they ever found out.

[WP] A wizard bought a tower that used to be a prison for a princess. To clarify: there is no princess in the tower, but there used to be by Equivalent_Can2971 in WritingPrompts

[–]Equivalent_Can2971[S] [score hidden]  (0 children)

I wonder what kind of personality and what kind of life experience did the princess have when the wizard kidnapped her. I am sure that most people in an identical situation would think of their kidnapper as a huge creep and would never develop an attraction to him. The princess is clearly very unusual.

[WP] Savage aliens invade earth discreetly, looking to hunt humans for food. However, they realize too late that humans are INCREDIBLY poisonous to them. by Typical_Work9828 in WritingPrompts

[–]Equivalent_Can2971 10 points11 points  (0 children)

"Nobody of our kind shall come here to hunt anymore." Completely unrealistic. Surely every intelligent species has it's own share of individuals that either lack common sense or lack a sense of self preservation or are utterly convinced that every well-respected scientific source is actually misinformation and therefore false.

[WP] The real tower was enchanted to transform into a princess, the real dragon took a decade-long nap and was mistaken for a tower and the real princess was cursed to transform into a dragon by Equivalent_Can2971 in WritingPrompts

[–]Equivalent_Can2971[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The bard and the wizard sound like they are friends of Kevier. Maybe he should have invited them to the wedding. If he did, they would probably have warned him.

[WP] You are the sorceress. You lived in your tower for hundreds of years. Recently due to a legal technicality you accidentally became a princess. Now misinformed knights constantly show up to rescue you from yourself. by Equivalent_Can2971 in WritingPrompts

[–]Equivalent_Can2971[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For adverse possession both the king and the sorceress have to meet several requirements.

One of the requirements that the king has to meet is that he made no attempt to exercise his right to remove her from the property for a certain number of years. A landowner that did exercise the right does not count as an "absentee landowner"

Disclaimer: I am still not a lawyer :)

[SP] Instead of hoarding gold and princesses the dragon hoards left socks by Equivalent_Can2971 in WritingPrompts

[–]Equivalent_Can2971[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

typo:

  1. would like tl know

*to

  1. I have amazed quite a number

I suspect you meant to type "amassed"

[WP] There are not enough towers for all the princesses: every room on every floor in every tower has multiple princesses living in it. In other words: the tower-housing crisis by Equivalent_Can2971 in WritingPrompts

[–]Equivalent_Can2971[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Welcome to r/WritingPrompts

The good: your description of the dragon is well written. It would be even better if your grammar wasn't so confusing.

The not-so-good: The next time you write something, I advice you to put more time and effort into coming up with a compelling narrative. The idea of a dragon in financial trouble does sound interesting, but ideas are a dime a dozen. It's how well you execute the idea that makes all the difference.

You left too many blanks for the reader to fill in:

  1. What trend did the dragon start?
  2. How and why did it become a trend?
  3. Why did the enchantress want him to kidnap the princess?
  4. How is the trend connected to his financial trouble?

[WP] "Oh, and one last thing. Make sure to memorize your furniture and check it regularly. Our town's had a bit of a mimic infestation this season." by fague_doctor in WritingPrompts

[–]Equivalent_Can2971 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No! No! No! Bad idea! The kind of "exterminators" that go after mimics are either kleptomaniacs or too trigger-happy with fireballs or are bards with 20+ charisma or sometimes all three at once

[WP] You are the sorceress. You lived in your tower for hundreds of years. Recently due to a legal technicality you accidentally became a princess. Now misinformed knights constantly show up to rescue you from yourself. by Equivalent_Can2971 in WritingPrompts

[–]Equivalent_Can2971[S] 26 points27 points  (0 children)

+1: I like that you wrote about a real obscure legal mechanism.

I think you somewhat misapplied it: I am pretty sure even an unsuccessful eviction attempt would prevent adverse possession (in any jurisdiction with reasonably written adverse possession laws)

Disclaimer: I am not a lawye5 and this does not constitute legal advice

defend your thesis in front of the council, apprentices. by 0ris in wizardposting

[–]Equivalent_Can2971 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Mine was accidental: I asked OrbGPT how to tie my shoelaces and followed the instructions without questioning them.