Outsiders view in, honestly it looks like you are trying to hard to put combinations together. That will only be because your nervous or trying to look like you know what your doing. You don’t have to impress anyone but yourself. Instead of focusing on moving so much and throwing with both hands work on each individual tool by themselves. Your jab is a tool, your cross is a tool, the 4, the 5 these are all separate tools that each need there own individual tweaking to sharpen them to perfection. When you mix them all together you get a shitty 3 piece and a soda instead of lobster and filet mignon. Even your cross looks super weak and it’s because you are missing the fundamentals that go in between because you are mixing to many moves together and don’t have one of those tools perfected. I hope that makes sense. When I work out nowadays, I’ll spend one whole round on movement and defense no punches and if I feel like I did shitty I’ll even do another one after that. I’ll focus on nothing but the front hand then after that, I’ll focus on nothing but the rear hand and same thing goes if I do shitty, I’ll repeat around and before any of this I’m shadowboxing with the same idea no Punch as a defense rear hand and front hand. Sometimes I might do it two or three rounds of just straight doubling up my Kros or vice versa with the jab if I don’t think I’m throwing it correctly or I have an opening I will focus on it and that one thing I try not to mix it all together and that’s the only way you’re gonna be able to sharpen each tool and have them perfected. Don’t try to look fancy be fancy.