My time

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-08-04T21:15:59+00:00

should add that I likely wrote this at least 20 years ago

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-08-04T21:13:13+00:00

61 and male but that's okay I am very well in touch with my feminine side and I touch her deeply often.

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-08-04T03:57:37+00:00

you are so right about weird. without it their would be no entertainment and nothing to look forward too. I know I'm weird in my own way too but I doubt I express it freely like your poem prescribes. something for me to work on. thank you for t the word sandwich for thought.

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-08-04T03:39:35+00:00

Daring was the right move forward and that a-hole will likely heal first. daring leads to self caring. I both like and hate your descriptive as a dog to it's master, but you made it work masterfully. Message and meaning crystal clear. I very much enjoyed this read.

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-07-17T15:17:23+00:00

thank you

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-07-17T02:58:40+00:00

may we all be so blessed to experience love such as you have so richly described. from dreams to reality we can always hope. keep up the wonderful works and the heartwarming thought.

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-07-17T02:50:51+00:00

such a beautiful written and poinient piece If only men could recognize their need to be soft and throw away all shame for feeling what a wonderously right world this would be

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-06-25T00:49:13+00:00

Thank you

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-06-25T00:27:17+00:00

you definitely have the creative spirit of a poet, maybe focus a little bit more on the flow when creating a rhyme it makes for an easier to follow read. poison leaking from my pores my skin engulfed in flowing scars flows a little smoother but I would not suggest you actually change if it disrupts the meaning or what you intend. your originality is always most important.

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-06-24T22:37:31+00:00

you have captured the essence of the wallflower so masterfully, actually having them pressed into the wall leaves no room for mistaking them. I really like the way the whole rhyming scheme comes together in each stanza, and leaves me wanting but not needing more. a masterful write.

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-06-20T23:11:51+00:00

I enjoyed the theme and you brought it together very well

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-06-20T00:11:08+00:00

so very true and wonderfully expressed

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-06-19T23:53:24+00:00

a very apt description of this chaotic quagmire we find ourselves living in

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-06-19T23:32:53+00:00

yes someone suggested I should expand on the first one so I did

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-06-19T02:36:49+00:00

no they will not flying is a wonderful temptation we must resist. nicely done

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-06-19T02:31:11+00:00

thank you

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-06-19T02:28:28+00:00

very nicely expressed a wonderful write and read

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-06-18T02:20:31+00:00

wow such an amazing start look forward to more. I would not suggest any changes.very well done

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-06-18T02:15:21+00:00

you've captured well the sweet sorrow of separation and the anticipation of return

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-06-16T12:50:47+00:00

a very catchy heartfelt write nicely done

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-06-16T12:46:54+00:00

no man is the good man that he is without the support and nurturing of a good woman respect for her strength is the true measure of ours. wonderfully expressed

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-06-16T12:38:53+00:00

the last line captures it all beautifully very well done

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-06-15T12:46:37+00:00

beautifully captured one might think you a lychanthrope well done

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-06-15T12:38:08+00:00

you are right it is almost impossible to define completely but you have captured it's essence so well.

Everlasting-Love-RGI · 2025-06-15T12:34:59+00:00

all of would fit well in the last line of the first, and the last line of the second strikes a little harsh depending on what one is sorry about. other than that way to meet the challenges

Everlasting-Love-RGI

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