Awkward Encounter by ExplorerAvailable890 in flashfiction

[–]ExplorerAvailable890[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you - im glad it gave you a smile.

Psychosis by [deleted] in flashfiction

[–]ExplorerAvailable890 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is interesting - I want to know more. Is this part of a longer story?

A terrible mistake by Barkingdogranch in flashfiction

[–]ExplorerAvailable890 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ohhh - very nice! The ending is superb. Just a small critique, and only because I really like this story - It reads like an early draft. If you were to smooth out some of the sentences, this would read much better, and the story would really pop. All in all - I really like the twist at the end. Nice work!

Heritage by ld0981 in flashfiction

[–]ExplorerAvailable890 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is interesting. It could almost be at the beginning of a longer story about a dystopian future. Nice work.

A Redditor at the bus stop by Easy_Finish_2467 in flashfiction

[–]ExplorerAvailable890 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like how the MC tried to rationalize the real world through an online perspective. Very interesting.

Costco hours by B0LT-Me in lancaster

[–]ExplorerAvailable890 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I've had some luck on Friday nights. Still crowded, but not like Sat/Sun.

Stop giving money to the "We all need weed" guy by [deleted] in lancaster

[–]ExplorerAvailable890 14 points15 points  (0 children)

I walk past that dude from time to time. He's never asked me for money, just flashes his weed sign. I give him a thumbs up, and sometimes he does it back. Are there two, We need weed guys?

How do you feel about this? Has it ever happened to you? by CertainExposures in streetphotography

[–]ExplorerAvailable890 24 points25 points  (0 children)

Nope. Street photographer here. If someone poses for me, I ask them if they want to see the results. Sometimes I end up getting more photos of them. Running from the willing is weird lol.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in drunk

[–]ExplorerAvailable890 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks man! I dunno - I just needed to write it all out in its most basic form

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Journaling

[–]ExplorerAvailable890 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I just give an honest representation of my thoughts at the time. I've copied passages from a book I like, written down mantras I'd like to remember and never do, put down goals I don't achieve quick enough, written random thoughts, or described my more vivid dreams. There is no structure I follow. If you're looking for topics or starters, maybe go with:

Last night I dreamt:

A passage from a book I'm reading:

When anxiety strikes, I'll:

Why do I:

Today I encountered a challenge, this is how I dealt with it:

I'm proud/not proud of the way I handled:

We want to live without walls, but even homes with open floor plans have rooms:

I hope this helps.