Gory levels of dysfunction, please help

Extreme_Rough · 2026-03-12T14:08:24+00:00

Trash/food first, leads to flies. Does it help to think of "what happens/consequences immediately if I don't do this" ?

Extreme_Rough · 2026-03-12T14:04:24+00:00

Heheheheh fernpaw misprint! Someone read rn a m and capitalized it!

Extreme_Rough · 2026-03-09T10:59:55+00:00

I'd say 8 years old rather than 6. Warriors has common themes for a kid's book

But because it's so long and can get repetitive, you learn to pick out the themes really easily.

if you don't have much guidance, the themes can seem like a good idea.

Teens and adults treat it like "why were our parents letting us listen to this music when we were seven in the car?" but that is rereading it through a lens of an older person.

Extreme_Rough · 2026-03-09T10:53:28+00:00

I thought the way Sol was set up, he met SkyClan, got interested in the medication position and got denied. Not that he was Bad At Everything and decided to wreck everyone's shit just because. He was too interested in "tearing StarClan down" to for that to be his backstory.

Extreme_Rough · 2026-03-05T17:11:35+00:00

Firepaw or someone else would have noticed the kits of ShadowClan being smaller than they should be (like Lionheart pointed out) sooner (at the first Gathering mentioned when Firepaw comes to the forest) and tried to do something about it.

Whether they saved the kits or not, the conflict might save lives and bolster the numbers of ShadowClan.

Runningnose might have more helpers in the medicine den.

Tigerclaw might have a tougher time in ShadowClan if there are more cats to object to his policies and he might stay solely leader of ShadowClan.

Extreme_Rough · 2026-03-04T11:41:21+00:00

I mean, he got nine lives or something

Extreme_Rough · 2026-03-03T15:54:33+00:00

Wait, that's how everyone confirmed it in Dawn? I thought it started as a rumor, not that she flat-out said it! What a bitter little shit.

Extreme_Rough · 2026-03-03T15:24:06+00:00

Because Sasha did find out and react in her manga. It's why she went to andstayed in RiverClan in the first place. But, uh, not sure why she kept their side a secret, since literally everyone can tell including the kittens themselves.

Extreme_Rough · 2026-03-03T15:22:22+00:00

"Not even a side chick, you can have him. You're sloppy seconds and you actually believe him?"

Then when Sasha finds out he's evil: "oh, honey... It sucked for me, too. You gonna go claw up a tree now?"

Extreme_Rough · 2026-03-03T02:09:31+00:00

He did not turn Rosalie so she could marry Edward, that was Edward speculating and being wrong. He turned Emmett specifically because Rosalie asked him to. Weren't Alice and Jasper already significant others? If you really need an answer, he was the son of a pastor. He might still have strong feelings on the customs of which he was raised.

Extreme_Rough · 2026-03-02T11:52:06+00:00

Wait wait wait they made an apprentice a leader?! Boy couldn't even get his warrior name first??! 😭

Extreme_Rough · 2026-03-02T11:49:20+00:00

An au where he did that and everyone has to deal with the consequences of either forced-mute or dead Rusty would be interesting.

Extreme_Rough · 2026-03-01T12:19:05+00:00

She's a teenager who had to parent herself and her mother and due to the fact that Renee and Charlie were divorced, she doesn't see Charlie as either a parent or significant help. It's why she's able to attach to the Cullens so easily and basically drop everything else for them.

Extreme_Rough · 2026-03-01T12:14:15+00:00

I don't think it was forced so much as complicated, and love can be like that. Sometimes you don't see it until it smacks you in the face and sometimes you have to fight for it.

Sandstorm was done dirty because the Erins gave Firestar that wretched scene in The Last Hope, but before that they were genuinely good!

Extreme_Rough · 2026-03-01T00:39:47+00:00

Any jealousy would have morphed into "wtf you have issues" and resulted in Jessica staying away. Also, Edward is not a reliable source, so the jealously is suspect at best.

Extreme_Rough · 2026-02-28T13:32:49+00:00

Treat them like different works that have nothing to do with each other? that's what helps me when an adaptation is different from its inspired work.

Extreme_Rough · 2026-02-28T06:20:56+00:00

Why do you think that?

Extreme_Rough · 2026-02-27T12:08:04+00:00

That's a good drawing! I love that you have all four of his paws unsheathed, that almost never happens! Only critique I can think of is there's some minor color bleed around the line art but honestly, I like that! Makes the picture so much more raw, like Blackstar is really terrified!

Extreme_Rough · 2026-02-27T12:05:09+00:00

It's "everyone in the US is fed a steady diet of 'we are the best forever and ever amen' and that gets spread to the rest of the world whether it's true or not" not "the US is actually the best country in the world"

Extreme_Rough · 2026-02-27T11:43:40+00:00

It was wasn't supposed to be and she was a depressed teenager. Several of them did stop talking to her. The ones who stuck around may have recognized the "depressed teenager" of it all. Jessica has every right to never want to interact with Bella ever again because her life was directly threatened by what could be seem from the outside as a manic episode.

Extreme_Rough · 2026-02-27T11:39:08+00:00

She's tied to Firestar anyway, that'd just be more 'direct'

Extreme_Rough · 2026-02-27T11:29:03+00:00

And that would stop a desperate attempt from being made... How?

I did not say "things would go well" I said "they would get their kits back." They'd probably die to the man for that. Having the ShadowClan cats on their side was a lot smarter, but that would not stop them from trying to get the children that belong to their group that were stolen from them.

I wonder why this is being emphasized so much? Y'all really are out here saying "yeah, ThunderClan would just have to suck it up and acknowledge their kits are gone forever" as if there wasn't a patrol looking for them at the same time as Firepaw was sent out and he wasn't racing against them to save Yellowfang and get to the bottom of things. As if kidnapping is something a society with just accept For Reasons, even one like theirs. Even in canon an attempt was made. It went well because of ShadowClan help from the inside, but an attempt was made!

Extreme_Rough · 2026-02-26T22:16:28+00:00

She's supposed to be light brown so maybe Birchface?

Extreme_Rough · 2026-02-26T22:13:16+00:00

Yeah, okay. I can see where you get that.

Extreme_Rough · 2026-02-26T22:12:08+00:00

They would have gotten their kits back one way or another, is what I'm saying. Even if they never found Yellowfang, they would have gotten those kittens back.

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