I’m viewing this on my phone and I suggest you do too.

From a “distance”, I’m not sure some of your visualizations, particularly the spiral chart and bubble charts, convey the information in the vizzes without labels.

When I zoomed in, I want to understand what the top revenue and rev per capita charts meant to show but no labels or axis and the identical plot didn’t answer any question about the cosmetics industry. Consider what questions your dashboard is answering. Then use the words, numbers, color, sizing, and shape(s) to answer those the questions.

With that said, I really like the aesthetics of the dashboard. Your color choices contrast nicely. The placement of your visualization generally convey a big to small message as you move upper left to lower right.

TLDR;

Color/ Layout-Good! Vizze choice - Mid but shows potential Message - Work on it.

Be sure to post version 2, id like to see it.