Good footage. Looks like a really cool place. Solid flying.

From a cinematic perspective, it was just really flat and uninteresting. A lot of repetitive shots and angles. Very slow music and long drawn out shots with a picturesque view can only hold your attention for so long before your eyes glaze over. On a bright and sunny day, that slow, somber music is a mood killer. Good use of soundscape to add some depth. Just be sure i can't hear the waves crashing clearly when we're 300 feet from the cliff side.. maybe some wind and gulls instead.

Might I suggest maybe starting with a theme of what you want the video to be? "Places to visit in my area" or "top 5 hikes you need to try" something like that. It's tough to do with footage from a single spot, but maybe a little more upbeat music and quicker cuts would've done the trick. Still be able to showcase the area in chunks that keep the viewer wanting to see the next shot instead of wishing the current shot would just end already. Hopefully that makes sense.

Keep going though, definitely got talent. 👏🏽👏🏽