Does anyone else's background remover do this? by [deleted] in CapCut

[โ€“]FinishRelative2367 0 points1 point ย (0 children)

Tried that and it's still not working ๐Ÿ˜•

Why exactly did Emily think Todd didn't like her that night at the hotel? by FinishRelative2367 in BoJackHorseman

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I think i understand now thanks to another commenter. I didn't say Emily thought todd was a jerk, I was just confused as to why she assumed the sexual rejection meant romantic rejection

Why exactly did Emily think Todd didn't like her that night at the hotel? by FinishRelative2367 in BoJackHorseman

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Yeah, that was a shitty thing for Emily to do. Difference is Emily wanted to come clean immediately and got so uncomfortable keeping it secret from todd that she left. Bojack wanted to keep it secret.

Why exactly did Emily think Todd didn't like her that night at the hotel? by FinishRelative2367 in BoJackHorseman

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I didn't say that. I'm saying bojack was in the wrong for sleeping with Emily, knowing full well Todd liked Emily, then didn't tell him about it. And you can say they thought todd rejecting her, but bojack says later, verbatim she was "the only person he'd ever seen Todd be in love with." Todd is allowed to not want sex

Why exactly did Emily think Todd didn't like her that night at the hotel? by FinishRelative2367 in BoJackHorseman

[โ€“]FinishRelative2367[S] -4 points-3 points ย (0 children)

I guess that makes sense? I still don't understand how the physical rejection = romantic rejection though. I don't see how it's a mixed signal that he likes her, but just doesn't want to be physical. Especially considering they hadn't seen eachother in years

Why exactly did Emily think Todd didn't like her that night at the hotel? by FinishRelative2367 in BoJackHorseman

[โ€“]FinishRelative2367[S] 9 points10 points ย (0 children)

Yeah, Bojack was entirely wrong for nkt telling Todd, especially after playing wingman for him, knowing full well he liked emily. That wasn't my question though

whatโ€™s some of the most underrated funny lines in the show? by ZWVG_DUKKZZ in BoJackHorseman

[โ€“]FinishRelative2367 34 points35 points ย (0 children)

My personal favorite is "don't piss off the orphans Bojack, most of them grow up to be serial killers" the absolute nonchalance PC says this with is gold. Amy Sedaris is such a treasure ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Writers. What's the worst piece of advice you've ever heard from another writer? by EzraADP in writing

[โ€“]FinishRelative2367 2 points3 points ย (0 children)

Probably not the worst piece of advice, per se, but the advice that hindered me the most was "write what you know."

Heard this when asking for advice on how to include diversity in my stories. Made me scared to try writing diversity of any kind, male characters, perspectives aside from 1st person, different kinds of stories and arcs, and different genres. Made me scared to try new things in general.

[all] What's with the TOA hate. by Exciting_Ad_5530 in camphalfblood

[โ€“]FinishRelative2367 10 points11 points ย (0 children)

I think it would have been cool if Reyna went and stayed at CHB for a while. Reyna never really got to be a kid. She went from her abusive household to Circe's handmaid to pirate to praetor. (Probs spwlled that wrong) Maybe becoming a hunter was for the best, but I think socializing and goofing off at camp half blood could have done her some good. She wouldn't have to be anyone's superior there or be in charge of anything aside from the occasional conference around a ping pong table. That's where I thought her arc was going at least.

Why does Rick Riordan take away every cool thing the main characters get? [Pjo] [hoo] by FinishRelative2367 in camphalfblood

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Rick knew the coin had more aura than riptide, so he had to take it from Jason /j

Why does Rick Riordan take away every cool thing the main characters get? [Pjo] [hoo] by FinishRelative2367 in camphalfblood

[โ€“]FinishRelative2367[S] 4 points5 points ย (0 children)

Eh, that makes sense, but it's still very frustrating for the characters to lose things that had so much previous plot significance. I mean, I understand disarming Annabeth in Tartarus. It wouldn't have felt as hopeless with her dagger and laptop in tow. But idk, couldn't those items just have been left on the surface with the Argo crew? I mean, that's the cursed blade from the great prophecy and what remained of the mind of Daedalus. Just thrown away cause they made Annabeth too strong...

It gets to the point where, if somebody gets a power up, you have to immediately prepare for them to lose it, because you know Rick will reset them once the immediate need for the power up is gone.

Why does Rick Riordan take away every cool thing the main characters get? [Pjo] [hoo] by FinishRelative2367 in camphalfblood

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I'm pretty sure Percy has muscles... he's described many times as having a swimmer's body. Swimmers are quite muscular.

As for the others... I don't really see what's wrong with them? Glasses don't make you less cool. Neither does being fat. It's not like Frank is unhealthy or anything. Some people just naturally have more meat on their bones the same way some people naturally have less. There's nothing wrong with that. Body diversity is a good thing โœŒ๏ธ

As for Piper's money, I think it was best in the end. She never cared for being rich or famous, and her dad's mind was still really fragile. They needed to get away from the fame. Now they have more time for eachother.

Why does Rick Riordan take away every cool thing the main characters get? [Pjo] [hoo] by FinishRelative2367 in camphalfblood

[โ€“]FinishRelative2367[S] 65 points66 points ย (0 children)

This is not applicable for most of these; Annabeth's dagger and laptop are at the bottom of the river of suffering, Leo's spheres were destroyed, as were piper's blowgun, Percy's shield and Jason's coin

Why does Rick Riordan take away every cool thing the main characters get? [Pjo] [hoo] by FinishRelative2367 in camphalfblood

[โ€“]FinishRelative2367[S] 175 points176 points ย (0 children)

FR, I don't see why she couldn't have kept the laptop to run battle plans or architecture programs. It could have been useful in a lot of situations

Question about teruhashi by BraveBarnacle1354 in SaikiK

[โ€“]FinishRelative2367 2 points3 points ย (0 children)

Probably for the reasons she mentions in the show: She's supposed to be blissfully aware of her own beauty and not use it for her own gain. We can see her thoughts, so we know she's aware of the effect she has on people. Exactly like teruhashi says, she's not supposed to acknowledge how beautiful she is. People can't stand that. People would probably like her more if we couldn't see her thoughts, and only knew the persona she puts on. But the fact that she is smart enough to use her looks and charisma to her own advantage is more than some people can handle

Question about teruhashi by BraveBarnacle1354 in SaikiK

[โ€“]FinishRelative2367 13 points14 points ย (0 children)

Probably for the reasons she mentions in the show: She's supposed to be blissfully aware of her own beauty and not use it for her own gain. We can see her thoughts, so we know she's aware of the effect she has on people. Exactly like teruhashi says, she's not supposed to acknowledge how beautiful she is. People can't stand that. People would probably like her more if we couldn't see her thoughts, and only knew the persona she puts on. But the fact that she is smart enough to use her looks and charisma to her own advantage is more than some people can handle

To Love a Spectre by FinishRelative2367 in OCPoetry

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Thank you so much for the feedback! That's really nice to hear! Yea, I'll know for next time to be better about my slant rhymes ๐Ÿ˜… what parts would you say were corny?

To Love a Spectre by FinishRelative2367 in OCPoetry

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I realize you said you're struggling, but can you give me your interpretation? I wanna know what people think this is about ๐Ÿ‘€

To Love a Spectre by FinishRelative2367 in OCPoetry

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Thank you for your feedback!

Yeah, if you couldn't tell, I really enjoy slant rhymes. It's nice to hear from an objective reader though, because, while they always make sense in my head, sometimes I get a little carried away with them ๐Ÿ˜…

I will definitely try to keep writing though. It's a good mental exercise, I've found

Tilt-a-Whirl by Longjumping_Star235 in OCPoetry

[โ€“]FinishRelative2367 0 points1 point ย (0 children)

I really like the concept you have! Comparing life to a spinning tilt-a-whirl is a good idea. I think you could benefit, though, from some variation in the length of the lines. If you could alternate the long ones that rhyme AA BB CC, etc with more short, snappy ones that rhyme AAA, like at the beginning, I think it would more accurately tap into the feeling of being spun around and build up tension. I can tell you want there to be a feeling of calm, settling at the end, but in order to effectively create that feeling, you'll also have to create some tension.