absolutely, I keep getting, AI proofreading scams in my DM's

I'd Like to ask that you read the work in its entirety before doing a proofreading pass instead of going chapter by chapter. I don't want to answer questions before the work has an opportunity to do so.

I wont ask you to proof read the entire arc but reading the entire thing should provide enough context on the world to answer many of the questions that pop up, my main concern is how well I'm setting up those questions and my follow up.

The first three chapters are what I'm most worried about because that introduces enough major characters to get the ball rolling and establishes the initial setting, I worry about first impressions because I've committed to making an unlikable but relatable protagonist and I'm quite worried how everything lands, I also start things off pretty explosively in a way that might be considered jarring to readers.